Well this is certainly an interesting fic.

Writing wise is pretty well done, and well paced, the only real issues are that at times the canon characters come off pretty bland and you tend to repeat descriptions and dialogue quite a lot.

As for the fic itself... My opinion is mixed and this primary has to do with certain lore point you bring up that I'm uncertain if they or yours or you simply read and played different events than me. This is fine but it's a bit of a put off for me.

Overall I like this fic but I definitely think it's better read in chunks than by chapter release

Based on the relationships you've set up in the story so far, Joy is Cersie's cousin. Joy is her uncle Gerion's daughter.

Political aristocratic stuff but most people were peasants and did not have regular nutritious food for daily intense manual labor puberty didn't even start for most before sixteen and even today having a baby before eighteen is dangerous medical conditions

Farkiller

A true valyrian steel sword would probably go for a million golden dragons or more.

Tywin Lannister couldn't buy one because no one would sell it.

A million golden dragons is 210 million silver stags. That's enough to lay rail from King's Landing to Winterfell without a doubt.

Fantastic story. Couldn't put it down. Haven't read a quality fanfic like this in a long time. Keep up the amazing work!

Love that last line!

Tô curioso pra saber como vai se a Guerra dos Cinco Reis nessa fanfic — se ela ocorrer, é claro.

Griff huh, IDK much about the guy.

I feel so much stress about how much you're gonna do... I actually really hope Daenarys' baby survives

You're an artist good sir

Intresting start

I just binged this whole story and the fact its not got more favourites in criminal, amazing story

I just finished reading all the chapters. I gotta say I am rather impressed with this story I am totally gobsmacked. Cersi is really delusional like really screwed up in the head. If she does something to Nyra Nox will fucking bring hell to the lannisters I swear to God if she dies the lannisters are screwed.

Very glad to see the story continue, and what a continuation! I guess we all knew Dany would encounter betrayal, but it’s still tough to see.

Aemon’s reaction was exactly as I’d expect it. Awesome.

Speaking of expected reactions, I’d have to say Cerci & Joffrey’s was also as expected…

Overall a great update and looking forward to the next.

Spike

I think Nox should have a shadowcat as a pet when he goes beyond the wall. A shadowcat kind of fits him in a spiritual way like yin and yang. I hope you post more chapters out soon.