|Reviews for A Series of Crises|
| Shadow Cat From Hell chapter 29 . 11/12/2007
| LivEviL chapter 29 . 12/29/2003
LONG LONG TIME NO TALK!
I LOVED THESE LAST FEW CHAPTERS!
I just changed my email (it's on my profile) so none of my alerts were getting through and then i was sorting through some old reviews and i found out that you had updated (YAY!)
i dont suppose youd favor me with a sequel?
congrats on a fantastic piece of work
| jim hawking jr chapter 27 . 12/28/2003
it nice story
| Ryan chapter 27 . 12/27/2003
Well that's what happens when you don't update for a long time people start to forget. I'm confused, who won the Gundam fight? From the way you described it sounds like a draw. As for Asherah's fate, well it's up to you, though personally after all she has gone through I'd like to see her make it out alive somehow.
| LivEviL chapter 26 . 11/1/2003
How was that? HOW WAS THAT, YOU ASK?
THAT WAS SUPER GREAT!
It was breathtakingly excellent!
I'm speechless...or typeless...or whatever...
The fight was awesome, though in reality I'm sure George would have won, had he had tried harder...lol
I LOVED GEORGE CHASING CHIBODEE!
AH! i loved it more than any other chapter...
| Ryan chapter 25 . 10/30/2003
It would seem that Jonas made a critical mistake by letting his emotions get the better of him. It also seems that Asherah forsees that the only way to stop Jonas will also involve her dieing as well. Considering the goodbye scene with her brothers, she clearly does not plan on makeing it through this ordeal alive.
It is also safe to say that Asherah has tought Chibodee all she can since he held his own aginst Jonas.
If Jonas wants to free the people of earth from the control of the colonies and abolish the Gundam Fight tournament, he will have to prevent a champion from being crowned at the end of the 14th fight.
| LivEviL chapter 25 . 10/29/2003
Hey hey! I'm reviewing, though I don't think I'm exactly telling you what you want to hear...what do you want to hear? Do you have any questions? I'm sure *Ryan* could answer them because he's SO SMART!
Sorry...I'm better now...lol...well tell me what you want to hear and then maybe I could tell you just that, or maybe I couldn't and then I'd tell you why...
Great chapter! I liked the jealousy bit...it adds more emotion to the fic, and that's always good!
| Ryan chapter 24 . 10/25/2003
Oh boy, tech mistakes galore. Fortunately such things are my speciality. Bolt Gundam's main weapon if the Gravaton hammer and is NOT spiked. And the modifactions to Bolts legs are to be expected.
The attack of Chibodee's about 1/3 of the way through is called the Gounetsu (Bursting) Machine Gun Punch. Which is essentally several punches with only one thrust.
Yes, I saw YuYu and Rando is the correct name.
There is no special name for Chibodee's gun other than a beam magnum gun. Chibodee would also have to drop the 'glove(s)' first in order to grab the gun from its waist mount position, and since you mentioned a sizeable dent in the Maxter's right side I'd have Chibodee grab the gun on his left side.
As for getting tired of nothing but hyper modes and fights, no. Not if they are alternated between segments of plot and character interaction.
| LivEviL chapter 24 . 10/25/2003
Hey! I loved this chapter as usual, and you did a fantastic job with the fight scene! I really can't imagine how you do it, I mean, the whole thing plays out perfectly! No, I am not getting tired of the hypermodes and the fights because they're fantastic!
As for the names of some of the weapons used...I really can't help you there...it's been so long since I saw the show...I'm sure Ryan will get to it...he's pretty good at that! *JEALOUSY*
| LivEviL chapter 23 . 10/21/2003
I feel so bad! It took me ages to get to read this thoroughly, and I haven't even replied to your email! *mental slaps*
wo I'm tired...had dance...legs hurt...brain unable to function...please pardon this review, I'm on a caffeine high, trying to get all my hmwrk done...UGH, i think i might not do it...
I really liked this chapter
nothing was wrong with it! it was perfect, punctuation, grammar, word-choice
i'm not going to say it was my favorite chapter so far, though i cant really explain why, other than i just dont think it was, but it was a great chapter...
the ending wasn't weak it was just a fading kind of one, and not a cliffie...though i can see why you thought it was...
g2g do some latin, ttyl!
| Ryan chapter 23 . 10/16/2003
Reguarding Allenby's hyper mode, it would seem natural that she would aquire such an ability and would've had the support of the Neo-Sweeden scientists as well.
Note that most weapons used by Gundams and other mobile suits have a kind of failsafe mechinism in them that prevents any unauthorized user from operating them. In other words Allenby could not use Sai's flags as anything more than a piece of metal to swing at her opponent. Another example would be that only the Gundam Maxter can fire its beam magnum guns. If another siut tried to fire them nothing would happen.
Also remember that the modifactions that Wong made to the rules in the 13th fight do NOT apply this time around. Therefore attacking the cockpit is still a major no-no.
| Ryan chapter 22 . 10/13/2003
The chapters just seem to be getting better and better. Except for the lack of detail in the battle, namely the apperence of the new Gundam and exactly what attacks were used, it was quite good. The Ninjata on Rising Gundam would suit Asherah's fighting style nicely.
As for the thing with the eagle, the design can be found on the reverse side of the Kennedy half-dollar coin.
| LivEviL chapter 22 . 10/12/2003
HEYHEY! I LOVED THIS CHAPPIE! IT WAS SUPERFANTASTIC!
WOOHO! I G2G CUZ IM GROUNDED AND NOT SUPPOSED TO BE ON, BUT I WANTED YOU TO KNOW I LOVED IT!
| Ryan chapter 21 . 10/9/2003
That makes sence, a Valkyre. Seems only approperate that Nastasha would only nod like she did. After all last time Allenby kicked Argo's butt in only 48 seconds.
I get the feeling that it is part of Jonas's plan to keep Asherah guessing about his next move.
| LivEviL chapter 20 . 10/5/2003
i loved this chapter!
girl-bonding is v. important!
and poor chibodee, he was probably v. confused!
hope you get the next chapter out soon!