Reviews for Death God of Orario |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is poorly written mc is a coward near on instantly caved to the little half elf |
![]() ![]() ![]() no that was stupid why did he leave his wife and children ugh he deserved this |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'll go easy on you when you finish this arc cuz right now... I'm feeling angy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The story was better without this stupid arc |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You started the first chapter like you wanted to write a serious story, this chapter you wrote like you were trying to write a crack fic. It was not a good transition. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the story so far, keep up the great work. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome and congratulations |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute, thanks |