Loving this, really a shame if this is completely abandoned, hope you come back to it one day

I spent the last few days catching up with this fic. I like it! However, I do have a few pointers for you. I sometimes get confused with your narration. Some scenes feel a bit disjointed when I'm thinking one thing is happening but another thing happens instead, forcing me to reboot my imagining of the scene. This isn't much of an issue. It might just be my dumb ass. That said, perhaps focusing a little more on setting a scene would help out a lot!

As far as your characters go, they're on point. Anyone forced through Yharnam would eventually loose at least some of their humanity. The Night of the Hunt instills a very specific mindset. One that would obviously clash with Izuku's naivete as well as the general tone of MHA.

Specifically, I enjoyed Izuku's friendship with Elaine! I want to see more of the surviving characters from Bloodborne make an appearance. (I know hardly anyone actually makes it through, but shush. I like me some optimism.) I also find it interesting that you've focused on two side characters that don't really get much attention. Toru and Jiro. Good shit. Good shit.

Basically... keep up the good work! I'll be watching.

It was so peak

hope you update this sometime cause rhis is just so freakin awesome

Ok what the hell is that necrotic flesh? Is it from the moon presence or some other beast in bloodborne? I'll probably find out later but why not ask now?

NO I NEED MORE CHAPTERS PLZ!?

If you can go lethal, you will still do well in mock fights. Izuku's inability to best kids given his lethal experiences dealing with Eldritch Horrors is prove of his incompetence. Your comprehension of his ability translation is disgusting.

Can Izuku not be a doormat even in a fanfic? Also All For Nothing! Feel like I should say it after that bomb ending. Keuk.

I know it doesn't fit, ut damm, I really wanna see Gehrman or lady María awake and alive

Good story, hope you come back to it sooner rather than later.

I think it's wonderful. I like how the story is going. Take care of yourself. It's important

This story is excellent and I hope that you decide to continue it someday!

Thanks,
Dirt Rider

Finish it

WHERES THE REST PLEASE I NEED MORE

Midoriya for a guy who killed multiple gods hes struggling to kill something thats infinitely more easier than a boss in Yharnam. For the lack of a better term, Midoriya is very very weak than he should be.