|Reviews for Paradoxial Padawan|
| Beloved Daughter chapter 12 . 6/8/2011
Great story! I highly enjoyed all the twists you threw into the storyline. However, if you pull Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon from the past, how could the future ever survive them not living in the past? The future is comprised of events caused by the past after all.
| T chapter 12 . 11/3/2010
I would love to see more Ben and Qui-Gon in the future!
| T chapter 12 . 5/7/2010
I think a sequel would be awesome. Who is Obi wan's apprentice? Is it Luke?
| nick012000 chapter 12 . 6/3/2007
Nice story. I hope you write a sequel. The ripple effects of having Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon in the NJO would be interesting to see.
| rimera chapter 12 . 5/26/2007
omg... this was too funny! I loved it!
| starwars rocks chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
Very interesting and deep story - I enjoyed it very much.
| Reading4soul chapter 12 . 8/17/2005
Stumbled upon this story and had to read in in one go! :) Poor Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon, it's so harsh on them. Intersting plot though. Leaves space for a sequel. ;)
| TorontoBatFan chapter 12 . 8/13/2005
I found this story tonight and read through it.
It was quite well done, even if the time paradoxes make the head spin.
I must agree that the last chapter could have been played out a little more. Personally, I think this fic is screaming for a sequel. It would be interesting to see how Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon adjust to their new lives. Not only do the Jedi have new roles for them to cope with, but there is no longer the rule against attachments.
| Vivid Butterfly chapter 12 . 6/5/2005
That was a fun read. Unique idea, I liked it.
| Phoenix Flight chapter 12 . 11/1/2003
Wow! I was wondering how you could possibly resolve that! Nice solution.
Thanks for writing this! I'm sad that it's done!
| For You Blue chapter 12 . 10/13/2003
Congradulations and thank-you for a great ending to an interesting short story, well done.
| Trinity Day chapter 12 . 10/7/2003
Huh. The ending seemed just a bit too pat and abrupt. If you had expanded it, even to another chapter, I think it wouldn't seem so forced. But other than that, I enjoyed this story.
| Anaika chapter 12 . 10/7/2003
I've really enjoyed this story and I'm glade you found a happy ending to it. And I'm sorry to hear about your dog.
| For You Blue chapter 11 . 8/26/2003
Ha Ha, absolutely brilliant. Wonderful and any other word to discribe a story well done, including well done and please continue
| Anaika Skywalker chapter 11 . 8/26/2003
This is becoming so good, more please. I'm dying to know what happens. From a certain point of view, of course.