|Reviews for In Pursuit Of Magic: A Self-Insert|
| Scoolio chapter 119 . 12/6
I’m in fucking tears.
| ImMoku chapter 6 . 12/4
I hate when the character is debating his own moral i hope soon Adam will get drastic character development that will set his Path in magical world and his own Moral Compass i hope he's not a goodie two shoes..
| lachyfrost chapter 49 . 12/4
Fuckkkkkkk! are you serious? With any luck they won't die!? Fuck youuu. You fucker. I hate people like you. Fucking Hateeee! It was going so fucking well! Such a good character, book. Why in the ever living fuck did you just let him take two fucking 11 year old to fucking fight every competent student in the school? the fukcing dark lord himself? you fat fucking rat. FUCKKKK. I HOPE YOUR DOG DIES IN A HOUSE FIRE, BECAUSE YOU THOUGHT IT COULD FIGHT THE DAMN THING. FUCKKKK. WHAT THE FUCKS WRONG WITH YOU, YOU CUNT. FUCKKKKK. I HOPE SOMEONE PISSES DOWN YOUR THROAT IN YOUR SLEEP, BECAUSE THATS WHAT YOU JUST MADE ME EXPERIENCE. FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK.
| Guest chapter 118 . 12/1
Dude update your game of thrones story
| Foster-the-Wizards chapter 119 . 12/2
Bwst chapter yet your writing was sublime
| Cary Kate chapter 108 . 12/2
awesomeness. Grindelwald is great.
| Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 119 . 12/2
Grindelwald such a better dark lord than tom
| Pjo crossovers chapter 119 . 12/2
I do like it, I can see where Harry’s feelings are coming from too. Nice that grindlwald has finally caught on too
| fraewyn chapter 119 . 12/2
| OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla chapter 119 . 12/2
It was wonderful.
| NaraSadow chapter 119 . 12/2
I like the character development and world building, but story progression is a bit slow for my taste. Nothing wrong with it, mostly just personal preference to read things at a stretch instead of chapter by chapter.
Perhaps I should wait 3-6 months and pick up this story again. I hope it starts living up to the story description more in the future chapters:
"pursuing magic's secrets and uncovering the most tantalizing of mysteries this world has to offer!"
| fraewyn chapter 118 . 12/2
| QuantumView chapter 119 . 12/2
Had fun with Adam’s invention attacking him. I enjoy seeing him use his intellect at full power to optimize and resolve his problems, figure out things, plan his strategies, and form complex thoughts about what is really happening around him.
These are things I rarely see displayed with Harry, which I find depressing. He ultimately always has to rely on luck, whereas Adam does it with hard work, hard thinking, and planning.
Grindelwold counterplans to manipulate Voldemort sound fascinating, too!
Thank you for the chapter!
| OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla chapter 118 . 12/1
If war is what will come knocking, best Adam Clarke can do is be prepared.
| sd74 chapter 115 . 11/30
Two damaged souls just looking for a moment of tranquility in their times of discomfort or hardship.