Reviews for In Pursuit Of Magic: A Self-Insert |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There's drama and there's bundle of negativity that's MC like goddamn just because you already died once doesn't mean you can't have some sunshine and rainbows. the cover pic is bright, the title sound hopeful yet the chapters so far is anything but |
![]() ![]() ![]() His/Your dark thoughts honestly keep creating unnecessary lines |
![]() ![]() ![]() So for most of the chapters are just filled with monologues or him talking to himself. It's kinda feels off |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... You're so, I don't know Emo/Edgy inside your own head like dude you don't need to be so negatives all the time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too much monologue make SI a dull boi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eldritch shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... I kinda hoped that Adam would've gotten a power up from this |
![]() ![]() ![]() this some bullshit, chapters 180 and 181 aren't even appearing, not two hours after i started reading the latter on the app |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story beautifully emphasizes the importance of growth and learning from challenges. I genuinely admire your narration, how you wrote it was so cool. I am sure it would look fantastic in comic format. Let me know when we can collaborate to proceed further.. Contact info; discord: rachelstudio email: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eternal fire is nice. Cavemen would love it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() He got Riddle's diary and consumed the horcrux hence the personality and power changes. While it technically is the second year and thus the time for Malfoy to introduce it to Hogwarts... It seems it's been years in Golderoy's possession. When did he get it? Perhaps instead of Lucius Malfoy, it fell in his hands somehow? |
![]() ![]() Ah, merged with a memory, that explains it |
![]() ![]() once again proving the term "slow-boil" is just fanfic writer gobbledeygook for "boring and terribly paced" |
![]() ![]() ![]() That explains so much. |