Reviews for Harry's Christmas Wish |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Total confusion, I don't understand the story the way you have written it. I will try another of your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story. Maybe it is my messed up sleep schedule from the evil that is daylight savings time, but the Dumbledore plot line was weird. I don't think I understand what went on there. The rest was great. An interesting plot and lots happening! |
![]() ![]() Different. I enjoyed it very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so glad that I found your stories last night. This tale is absolutely outstanding! The concept and creativity, the political and societal world building, the characterization, and the best villain reveal that I've read in a long time... just WOW! Thank you for a great day of reading. In the earlier chapters, there were a couple of places where it seemed to have words or phrases missing from the end of a sentence, which normally annoys me, but I was so caught up in the story that they didn't ruin my enjoyment. When I find an author new to me, I sort their stories buy publication date and start with the oldest. I look forward to exploring the other tales that you have published here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story! I love HEA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really all this forgiveness of everyone is just unrealistic and pathetic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the beginning of the story, but can't comprehend how easily Harry forgave all the conspirators. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Imaginative in events. Realistic in people. Overallfun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great plotting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t believe Narcissa would be so stupid |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t recall this story but love it. Great opportunity for Gred and Forge. And someone shuts Molly up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the story. The number of betrayals of those close to him, Moody, Lupin, Snape, even Mrs Weazley was quite a surprise. Apparently Dumbledores hooks ran quite deep. Not sure I would have been so forgiving. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like you're switching up names on purpose... One moment it's Harry, the other it's Hadrian. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story. I am confused as to WHY Remus and Mad-eye, who KNEW Harry really well, would be involved in a necromancer ritual to bring back someone who had hurt Harry and many other people. Other than that - I liked the characterizations and storyline. |
![]() ![]() You really need some help with apostrophes and commas. Your story is well told but your grammar needs some assistance. Get a beta who knows the difference between plural and possessive, and how to properly form each. |