Reviews for What If? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it I loved it I loved it! Team Jacob for life! It was about time that someone wrote something so good from Jacobs pov! I always wanted a happy ending for him! And I don’t mean renesmee... I have to tell you though I would love to see twins in your story! More private scenes if you know what I mean ... I think the chapter when they left was a little weak but that doesn’t even matter! I loved jakes pov and I caught myself many times reading on my phone screen and laughing on my own! Thank you for the time you spent writing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am actually crying at 1.30AM because I've finished this story. Thankyou so much for writing, for saving Jacob's name (and hair) and for making me laugh, cry and binge read in the middle of a panoramic. This was literally the freaking BEST, big fingers to Smeyer as her position of author is no longer needed. I just can't tell you how good this was, so thankyou (also capitalising the word Thought had me CRYING with laughter every time ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! Dang, reading through all the normal New Moon build up just made me that much sadder for Jacob in canon for having to deal with Bella leaving for Italy. The only real gripe I have was for how you had Edward mirror what Jacob did with the forced kiss and the meeting afterwards. They just didn't mesh with him for me. I really did like how you did Edward before that though. Even though I love Jake/Bella stories, I've always been bummed how Edward always seems to have his character changed in order to try and justify Bella's decision. But man, you really were on point with Jacob's character, it was awesome reading from his POV! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was that all my hopes and dreams finally coming true? This was the story I didn't know I needed in my life. Your author's notes are everything. Thank you for bringing me some profound escapism while I wait for my surgery. You're the best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BITCH thank you so much for writing this story! It was so beautiful and literally exactly how it should have goneeee. Seeing Jacob progress from a little baby to an amazing daddy is everything. I wish we could’ve seen him step up as alpha. I still don’t forgive Sam for forcing Jacob to stay and watch Bella get manipulated ugh! And thank you for being a nurse during this insane year! The work y’all do...I bow down to you all. Thank you thank you thank you! I’ll be back to read it again in a few months lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FUCK SAM IF IT WAS EMILY HE WOULD HAVE RAN BACK SO FUCKING FAST HOLY SHIT IM PISSED |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gaelic hymns girl I cannot lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yassss redeem Jasper |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHACK. I fucking love the authors notes omg |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don’t make me fucking cry how dare you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no Angela. What the hellllll |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m LIVING for these author notes omg. This is why I’m Team Jacob! His character got butchered in Eclipse! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This in Jacobs perspective is so hot for some reason. He’s so rebellious I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok but brooding muscular Jacob is hot as hell |