This has been such a great story! You have a real gift for writing. I very much enjoyed Rey’s journey to the past. Thank you for writing this.

You have written so many great story moments in act two. I loved your description of how the Jedi left, taking their very temple apart in the process. Maul in the council chamber scolding Jinn for not figuring things out sooner. I especially liked Rey drugging Obi-Wan so Maul and the Mandos could ’collect’ his bounty. Thanks so much for sharing your story with us and helping Rey to finally develop her character’s potential.

I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how much I have enjoyed the part one of this story. I found the slow changes in Maul believable and I loved his realization the light side of the force could do things (like healing) the dark side could not. Rey’s reaction to Yoda’s punishment of training with the initiates was priceless. I really did not like those nightmare visions old sheev kept sending her. I think they traumatized me almost as much as Rey. I am glad she finally talked to Qui-Gon about them. Loking forward to park two.

I love what you have done with this story thus far. I always thought Rey’s character possessed so much potential. Yet Daisy and her costars were saddled with weak plots and substandard writing. (As if Luke would ever give up on the galaxy.)
Your version of Rey and her interactions with Qui-Gon and especially Obi-Wan are a delight. Obi-Wan snorting and declaring to Rey, “Force, my life would be so boring without you,” after the force lightening incident had me laughing and snorting too. I’m excited to see where you take this story.

Dear force this was such a disappointing, boring, oh so typical read. Try doing something interesting. Waste.

What kind of bullshit is this? Did Rey suddenly forget she is a time traveler?

Still find this kinda meh. It’s out of left field, and really served nothing for the sith. I guess they could have simply lashed out, but never have the sith been able to do that and avoid total detection for long periods of time, especially with a quickly made minion.

the fuck

Can't fault Rey's logic. If the dark side is gonna b*tch its problems on her then it deserves a b*tch slap.

This story is a gift that just keeps giving. Endless amounts of wonderful pieces of wisdom, interpretations of the force, connecting ideas, and ways to develop characters. A masterpiece.

One of the best chapters.

I love this story. Re-reading it is just as fun as the first time! You made Rey an amazing character in this. You took her potential from the sequels and polished it.

Thank you for giving Rey's character a chance to develop and shine! I adored her relationships to her Jedi friends/family as well as her Mandalorian connections, and I especially came to enjoy Maul's character arc in conjunction with hers. Very enjoyable reading!

This is terrible. Just a obi-wan love fest. And obidala is so so boring. No paradox? Yeah sure. Waste of time. So sad the Anakin hate. Really brave as well I mean it is so stunning to hate on one of the most hated star wars characters. Think I am being unfair? Well as this trashed anidala and Anakin I don't think so. If anything I am not being too unkind.

I don't get update emails anymore so here i was thinking you'd stopped writing! I had plenty of chapters to binge read and it was amazing! Yours are some of my favourite star wars fan fics. Probably because you have put so much effort into the research.
I agree Disney failed us with the sequals. Best way to watch them is as fanfiction themselves. That way you can overlook any inconsistencies and Mary-Sue Rey.
Keep up the amazing work and i shall go and reread what's already there. Mandos or Kenobi? Guess I'll decide in a minute.

It’s official. Maul is a Tsundere. Lol.