I wasn’t sure what to expect from this fic but holy hell was it amazing. You gave Rey an actual personality and it was bright. I didn’t expect some of the pairings AT ALL but the way you wrote them made it work. All it all, this is a masterpiece and I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Do I think Rey is an idiot for that? Yes. Do I think Palpatine is a bonafide genius? Also yes.

loved it all!

Mace. It of course had to be Mace (SLJ) to say that.

I've been thoroughly enjoying this story and intend to continue. I've not reviewed as the story is completed and you've written more since. One thing in case nobody's told you: there seems to be a word-usage error in nearly every chapter.

"fine enough place to be natured in" I'm sure you mean nurtured. I've seen enough of these, yet so few per chapter and otherwise good grammar, that I'm wondering if it's intentional. Just for amusement's value, of course.

Either way, on to continue reading!

Qui-Gon cleared his throat, "I told you that she was a time traveler, correct?"
Qui-Gon almost smiled as he folded his arms in his sleeves, "No, I must have told you, that seems like too big a thing to simply slip my mind."

Mace closed his eyes and said with real feeling, "Jinn, you motherfucker."

HAHAHAHAAAHHAHAHAH I laughed so hard at this and it very accurately sums up Qui-Gon whole attitude!

Great chapter I loved it so much

lol

Awesome I love it but what about anakin?!

I just gotta say that this has been fan-fuckin-TASTIC so far! My first fic I found of yours was Laughing to London, but this has been even more enjoyable. I haven't commented until now, because typing out commentary on all the details I enjoy while on mobile would be a pain, but I did want to say at least one thing:

The Jedi and the Mandalorians suddenly have a LOT more in common! XD

This is a massively better interpretation of how an order of space wizards ,with limited prescience and precog as part of their standard skills, would behave given what’s going on around them. Much better than the newer movies ever really managed.

Oh, I love how wigged out they are that some one emotionally stable and balance who ISN’T tainted by the Temple’s little problem in the basement can resist the dark-side.

Huh, lightsaber pike/staff ataru for Rey it looks like. Of if she uses a dual bladed or dual core saber with a staff body she’s going to be a nasty surprise to anyone she fights.

Burn in Hell you shitstain. You don’t forgive people like this. You don’t play nice. You tell the fucker rey to go fuck himself. I’ve blacklisted you as a writer. I can’t stomach your stupidity and forgiveness tripe. It’s bullshit and only gets you betrayed again. You want company and friends? Find new people that havnt already proven to be false. Those don’t get another chance. Billions of others out there to find that might not be such disgusting examples of human feces. Family? Means nothing but sharing some similarities with people. They can be just as sick, just as evil, and just as backstabbing. Even being born of the same womb doesn’t mean they are incapable of betrayal. If anything when family does it, it just hurts worse. Fuck “family” is more important. It’s a brainwashed lie. Fathers raping daughters, mothers abusing sons. If family actually fucking mattered, those things wouldn’t happen. Fuck family! Fuck blood! And fuck forgiving betrayers, EVER!

downright fking AMAZING! WAY BETTER THAN CANON!

maul is the real og loverboy omg i love this please let it happen! he deserves happiness!