Reviews for A Loving Mother, A Perfect Wife
Shurukkah chapter 1 . 2/22/2020
Almost all Vegas fics don’t reach the end so it’s nice to see it.
marlastiano chapter 1 . 2/22/2020
Very nice :)
TimothyB chapter 1 . 2/22/2020
This was a great story. Wouldn't mind seeing more like this. Keep up the great work!
robert32514 chapter 1 . 2/22/2020
Great one shot.
KarisTasogare chapter 1 . 2/22/2020
definitely one of your better ones, thou Kal's 'I see you' was a bit creepy. (as it gave a 'peeping tom' vibe).
possibly as the concept worked far better than most 'woke up, married' stories do. given they are set 'immediately' after, rather than later as this one was.
Perseus12 chapter 1 . 2/22/2020
I would say: cooooooooooooooool~! *Thumbs UP!*
WolfbrotherTitan chapter 1 . 2/22/2020
It’s a bit on the short side, but that’s not a bad thing, it all works together and only really leaves me with one question, what does Harry do for a living? I wouldn’t ask except that he was apparently ‘at work’ when the heroes showed up, kind of like how I don’t need to ask if Luna or Shayera work, though I will say it’s hard to think of Shayera retiring to become a stay at home mom, still, these are non issues and I just realized I don’t have anything else to say except thanks for the story.
tf330129 chapter 1 . 2/22/2020
Keep it up :)
hellixe chapter 1 . 2/22/2020
Loved this and would love to see more!
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