|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Ashes of Chaos|
| darklingdark13 chapter 70 . 11/18
pure beta mc. there is not one character who did not fck him one way or another. spineless cowardly. acting like he is cunning yet he is just cnt. Lockhart fcks him 7 ways and when he ask for another round our sissy mc asks which position.. really tried hard. author is good with english and nothing else. stretching the story like a drag queens latex. add unnecessary "foreshadowing" for characters who has no point and or weight.
| JeanPaulVS chapter 80 . 10/27
Por que dejarlo aqui... por que... por que!
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/14
you did priori incantato corrects it shows spells used in reverse order if hurst was smart she would of gone back to her class and spammed the spells she was teaching Dumbledork would only be checking for a minute or so for the spells cast recently there is no reason the ak would of come up
| El Publicano chapter 80 . 10/15
Ahhh it hurts that this hasn't been updated for over a year. But I hope it will be updated again. Very good story
I really liked the way the characters and the plots that surround them have been built.
| RyanMK666 chapter 1 . 10/14
Still waiting for this to continue, you’re clearly still writing because of your other stories so why leave this one in the dust? ):
| Aetherium21 chapter 27 . 10/13
Touching scene, I can’t recall a similarly positive moment for Percy in other stories
| abuduu chapter 1 . 9/17
In the comments, it's mentioned that harry gets out spelled by hermione even after all the training he has gone through. That really decides it for me.
| Kirbs85 chapter 80 . 9/11
OMG I just binge read this whole story in a week lol. Please tell me you are updating soon! I need more lol.
| crashthisnow chapter 51 . 9/6
.WTF... I, this is...(I'm legit crying right now.)
I feel so conflicted, on one end I want to see harry grow further as a person and just see him get closer to his friends (love interest?).
On the other hand I, this is getting on grounds of mentally traumatizing.
So now what do I brutalize myself in order to reed a masterpiece or do I drop it and possibly never get all the answers I need.
| Guest chapter 35 . 8/27
That invisibility would've been really helpful when he got caught.
| Guest chapter 33 . 8/27
He's been training all this time to get out spelled by Hermione? Really? That's so embarrassing, might as well snap his wand and go back to living without magic.
| Big.Daddy.Dudders chapter 35 . 8/28
Overall it’s very good. But i also think it’s a bit convoluted. If I’m thinking that in second yes i can only imagine how much worse it’ll get. Also i think you should’ve changed the starting she fit hogwsrts. That would’ve fixed your 11 year old talking like adults thing but it doesn’t really bother me.
| tfuinsah chapter 52 . 8/27
An infodump flashback in the middle of an action sequence. Couldn't this be inserted somewhere else. During Charlus' sessions with Lockhart or something.
| tfuinsah chapter 40 . 8/27
At this point I wouldn't trust Dumbledore to do anything. He's a powerful fool deluded into thinking he's smart. He's the equivalent or Aerys, just a touch more sane.
| major wallace chapter 80 . 8/24