I decided to read the story again. I'm hoping one day you pick it back up

Im late i know but another chapter perhaps

por favor continua con la historia esta muy buena y por favor acerca mas a nauto y raven

I like the story even though I am a little over the whole chakra to all and Otsusuki. Still I am interested in which way you will take this story but I was looking forward to other w

Christ, this chapter was a monster. The fight and the reappearance of Ei were lovely. Poor Cinder sold her soul and she doesn’t realize what the price for that power truly is.

I can’t wait to see how Salem is doing, too. Between the therapy and the theory of the Pool of Light, we have the makings of a free Salem. Granted, Amber, Raven, and Winter will probably beat his ass for sending clones into enemy territory.

Does this also mean that Cinder has access to the Sword of Destruction?

It was good until you involved the space aliens and gave chakra to Remnant!

loved the chapter so much I reread the whole storu

Dude you should finish this, it's pretty darn good, and ignore the trolls, most of them are idiot kids between 9 and 16 yrs old, just ignore them, if you can just delete their trash, don't waste your time on them it's what they want, they thrive on the attention, if you ignore them it'll royally tick them off, nothing irritates a troll more then getting ignored

Give me more I enjoy each of your chapters in all of your stories. GIVE ME MORE

Man I love this story. It’s absolutely crazy.

Finally caught up! This is an amazing read so far! I really am looking forward to more. I hope you’ll continue and keep planning out those future arcs. I’m especially wondering what’s planned due to the many possible things that have happened in RWBY Volume 9 so far.

Until next time!

More chapters

That was definitely along one.

Hahshshshajsja onfg lmaoooo i cant type. That was the best joke i heard in ages.

„Ungabunga, rasengan smash.“

Did you use a different technique? This chapter had a different flavor than the rest. Still a banger, though. I'd like to see more of Ei for the next few chapters, as well as Raven and her child. Keep up the great work!