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A Viserys who isn't a complete arse? Color me surprised...

I dont agree with Harry having to apologize here. Its YOUR child. YOUR responsibility to watch your child. Even if other adults are there you should always keep your eyes on them. To blame someone else for your lapse in judgement is not okay. Yes, he could have bring awareness of the situation to you, but its like being at a park. Is another mom responsible for your child eating sand if you chose not to keep your eyes on them? NO, but the mom if she knows you, could bring awareness to the situation. Im fine with how things happened, but he should remind her that hey a job of a parent is to keep your eyes on your kid because anything can happen. Overall great chapter

Stannis is a hypocrite. Taking Davos’s fingers for smuggling food to Stannis’s forces but not executing every man who killed in war - murder is more illegal than smuggling, after all. If killing in war is not a crime, smuggling in war to aid a specific side would not be either.

Anyone who thinks a man named Potter must be a commoner has forgotten the name of the great house that originally built and ruled Highgarden - House Gardener. A potter arguably outranks a gardener, since a gardener serves another, while a potter is a tradesman in his own right.

On the topic of Targaryens with magic, I wonder if Harry has realized - or is resisting realizing - that the ONLY thing stopping King Aerys from being every bit as bad as King Voldemort would have been, is Aerys didn’t have magic. He wants to see the Usurpers as evil men, but the truth is that Harry himself would have been on the Usurpers side in that war, if he had been in Westeros then.

If breaking, vanishing and regrowing bones cures Doran’s gout, then the problem was NEVER gout to begin with. If it actually WAS gout, the treatment they’ve applied will have zero beneficial effects beyond the immediate but very short term pain relief the milk of the poppy gives (which is known as opium on Earth). If it provides a partial cure, then Doran had at least one bone disease on top of the kidney disease known as gout, and he’ll still need treatment for the gout.

Skele-Grow and/or vanishing bones would have no effect whatsoever on gout. It’s a kidney disorder, not anything to do with bones. Uric acid builds up and crystallizes in the joints because the kidneys are under-performing, causing arthritis-like symptoms. The best non-potion treatment available in Dorne would be to cut down on foods like liver or shellfish, get enough exercise to prevent ovesity, while greatly increasing consumption of citrus fruits - limes would be the ideal, grapefruits second best, and lemons or oranges a distant third.

This chapter was just disgusting, seeing this racist serial accessory to murder and torture scheme, and hearing they are planning to let her serial killer and torturer husband out of prison after a less than 2 decades stint there, Narcissa deserve to be in Azkaban longer than that, as do Draco, Lucius deserve to die of Old age there.

This chapter just show how much the Wizarding world need a revolution, the pureblood racists committed genocide on the muggleborn, and they are still after losing that war in charge and corruptly stealing the tax money muggleborns pay to line their own pockets, a revolution is needed, and all the death eaters who escaped the first time need to be caught and sent to Azkaban including the Malfoys.

I really don’t think Hermione would be against adoption, though she would rightly be very much against the fact Harry has decided to make friends with racist murderers.

I hope Hermione and Ron are busy preparing a revolution, it’s totally unacceptable how all these death Eaters have stayed in power after they tried genocide, the Wizarding world is overdue for a revolution and institution of a democratic system.