| Reviews for The Adventures of Augment Gothic (A Star Trek SI) |
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   USSExplorer chapter 4 . 7/6/2020 Glad to see this, and you, back. |
| D72 chapter 4 . 7/6/2020 I was wondering if Annika might have changed, with the somewhat repaved path. Aside from sex, she didn't really get much to do in the original. Sorry you lost your co-op partner. |
| D72 chapter 2 . 7/6/2020 I can certainly see recasting the one-offs, but I dunno about turning Al-aureans into troll dolls with the gem thing. There was one author who wrote great stories, but he'd inevitably segue to gigantism and monsterism. I ended up just walking away from his fics, but I'm really hoping this revamp doesn't go down that path. |
| jeffwc0227 chapter 4 . 7/6/2020 Great 4 chapters really good major changes to to the original source material. I like Beverly Crusher in These chapters. He would have onboard his on his personal ship is His female crew basically is Harem. Beverly, Deanna, Kira, Jadzia D, Ro L, Kathryn J, B'Elanna T, Kes, Seven of Nine, B'Etor, Grilka, Lursa, Leeta, Tora Ziyal, Ezri, K'Ehleyr, Selar, Neela, Ch'Rega, Tasha Y, Ishara Y, t'pol mirror universe and Natima lang |
| tamagat chapter 4 . 7/6/2020 he should learn anything and everything useful for his furure as a warlord of the dmz! |
| vmage2 chapter 4 . 7/6/2020 I like the new and altered chapter. Well done. |
| ghost01987 chapter 4 . 7/6/2020 still awsome can't wait for more honestly I wouldn't change much from the original but as this is your story now it's up to you but for the next 36 chapters you have exilent material to draw from though I'm stoked for what comes after if you decide to go in that direction |
| kreep13 chapter 4 . 7/5/2020 That was awesome. Can't wait to see what way you take it from here. I look foward to a badass space ship in the future though... lol |
| Jose19 chapter 4 . 7/5/2020 I am a Trekkie fan but even this augment can be taken down easily superior strength and genetics don’t mean victory every time. The great captains of the series have proven that, and the technology equals or surpasses the skills of the OC. You severely underestimate the Klingons a skilled warrior can kill these characters, and they are a race to be admired. Khan the greatest of the augments was beaten by Kirk, and Picard can do the same to him. There are races that can breach his mind the Q for instance will not find trouble, and the traveler as well. |
| DoomStrider96 chapter 4 . 7/5/2020 yo! it's nice to see you getting back in the saddle again, especially after it was abandoned by Gothic himself. are you suggesting to actually change the plot? if so, definitely need to bang deanna. keep on writing, look forward to seeing more. |
| Kalstorm99 chapter 4 . 7/5/2020 great chapter! |
| pkmnmstr9412 chapter 4 . 7/5/2020 Two things. 1) Mazel Tov on the new baby, much congratulations to you and your wife. 2) I love the tweaks and changes that you've made, and I can't wait to see what else changes. |
| Jade9536 chapter 4 . 7/5/2020 Loving it keep it up |
| XRaiderV1 chapter 4 . 7/5/2020 still an enjoyable read. |
| Darkcrest27 chapter 3 . 7/5/2020 Hoping you will be minimizing the amount of material from Discovery and Picard please let them be either an alternate dimension or minimal influence on the story as their dystopian view of the future and general level of technology doesn't fit in with the rest of canon trek 1966-2005 |