thanks for the chapter. it's a great story and i can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck with the rest of the story

Probably do a real review when i finish the chapter but congratulations for doing something that alot of authors never ever achieved even with multiple storys so enjoy this accomplishment

thanks for the chapter and for writing.i am starting to really dislike Admiral pressman dudes a pile of hippo shit

Son : "Dad, can I read your Star Trek fanfiction?"

Joe Lawyer: *Tries to count how many times he's mentioned Annika's amazing rack or how enthusiastic Kira is in the sack*

"Sorry, but that's gonna be a no for me, dawg."

I've been loving this story since you took it over and started the rewrite. Looking forward to reading the next million.

Congratulations on another chapter in such a long run story. I enjoyed it. looking forward to the next chapter. I wouldn't be surprised if your son found the story eventually (hopefully after a few years) just a word of warning kids are uniquely determined.

nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing the admiral trying to worm him self in the situation :d

Love it once again. Though wish more was done as his reporting back to Bajor is taking far longer than expected. Wonder if Pressman will be the one to break through the do no care charm on the temptress and realize Gothic is far more advanced than realized. Unlike others who didn’t seem to care or realize its potential he seems to in the end. Keep up the great work and eager to see the results of their first encounter. Also wonder if Gothic fills in Picard on Pressman being a hypocrite due to the Pegasus.

Great to see more of this. I think there was an editing error during the meeting on Enterprise. You had Gothic repeat himself about his response to the Romulans and ask Prez. Moss to make it a joint statement, with her agreeing. I doubt you meant them to have the same convo twice.

And yeah, definitely fuck Pressman, the guy is a moron. He's spending more time chasing after Gothic than the actual enemies of the Federation. Its surprising no one has taken him to task yet honestly. How many resources must he have wasted with his repeated attempts to investigate Gothic?

it should be a crime to call a girl harriet. i never fail to cringe at that name

The original story was the first fanfic I read on this site. I still remember checking everyday if there was a new chapter for a couple of weeks after I read the last chapter. I really like the rewrite. I think the additions improved the story a lot. Thank you for continuing writing.

i dont see the problem. testing is concluded and was sucsessful so time to lease it. halt all further testing all you like

After reading the last chapter, I thought the Romulans were set up by Gothic to scare Starfleet into buying his defense net faster.

nice

Wow, five years of this and a almost a million words of the rewrite. Thanks for writing this. All I have left to say is keep the chapters coming!

Congratulations Dude, this story is so good.

P.s I don't write comment's often, sorry for the abrupt end.