So basically, the MC is a useless bag of garbage that has no effect whatsoever. I see now why this shit was dropped; that was a horrendous first chapter with zero closure. Not to mention Fate and Death are both cunts that won't get a satisfying ending. 1/10 story.

Ok come back pls this is good pls dont quit

Check your old computer

Nooooo whyyyy stupid computer

Good luck on your hunt and yeah it sucked

Crunch crunch yummy yummy lol jk just dont over work yourself

Patience is a virtue ppl use it

Wish this site had a way to get rid of all the speds that just live to hate on other people's efforts. Ain't nobody asked u to stay, don't say ur piece just liss off and read another story that meets ur majestic standards

Not surprised this got dropped

You did nerf him moron, and your retarded "I didn't nerf him" when it would be obvious to even a child that you did just makes you look stupider than a child.

If this is a "rewrite" I'd hate to read the original with this version being the steaming pile of crap it is.

Retarded horseshit

Utter fucking garbage

Parenting101
"Know that your mother and I will respect your choice, no matter what it is. We still want you to give it some thought before deciding."
Kinda looses it's credibility when not 10 seconds beforehand you're yelled at for voicing that choice.

I found this to be an interesting story. Hope you bring it back. We haven’t even gotten to the point where Harry/Archer starts forming relationships.