goddamn it this is just so annoying the misunderstanding and not talking you make hazel do, it irritates the hell out of me, she has no reason to withold that info as we have seen her interact with good and well meaning adults, so i think she can talk to mcgonagall.
just so annoying dude that you have to write this tropey shit to just to add some tension between characters and the story.

how does Dumbledore not know hazel is missing?
mrs. figg took care of harry in canon whenever the durseleys went somewhere so i assume she does here as well, are you telling me they have not gone anywhere in months or mrs. figg went to check on hazel or whatever?

Loving where this story has gone since I last checked in! You're doing some really fascinating stuff with world building and character development. Feeling a bit cliffhanger-ed right now, but such is the peril of reading in-progress stories. I'll just have to wait, hopefully but also patiently, like everyone else! Excited to see how things continue to unfold!

Hey, love the story. But man you need to read up on the history of the balkans. Sarajevo was besieged at the time. If Hazel went trough at the time, she'd be traumatised. Couple chapters ago you brought up the war and it was already borderline tasteless bc it was so off.
but that's just a little nitpick.

Forgot to fav, now it's done:)

just as we have a sense of our limbs i find it so bizarre that there wouldnt be a sense for this ability to warp reality to your whims. it just does not make sense that you have no feeling at all for a part of you that you can actively control.
if the magic worked like a muscle that she could feel but was just weak and in need of training her practice and improvement would be reasonable. just as when you work a muscle you would strengthen this magic muscle with use and recovery.

because it does not appear be anything like that, since she apparantly has absolutely no feeling for her power what is she actually improving as she gets better? is she improving her desire to bend the world to her will? but if all you need is the desire to bend the world to your will then anyone could do it so its not that...

i couldnt hold in my frustration with what is in my opinion low effort magic systems and felt the need to vent. i suppose the world of harry potter makes absolutely no sense with even a half-decent magic system... thank god for fanfiction.

venting over.

No such things as planned obsolescence for the Ollivander House. Is this a missed act? I can see them becoming the One Family to Rule them All if they were just a bit more cunning :D

Actually there's a grammatical rule in french that allows for using both gender for a translated word from another language.
The correct translation would then be "Né-Moldu" and as equally "Née-Moldu".

The rule also applies for foreign terms that aren't translated like for the Game boy. In french both saying "Un Game-Boy" or "Une Game-Boy' is equally correct :D

Moreover for the Game-Boy case, the name would be masculine, but in french is a game device aka "Une Console" and therefore feminine. I find it really amusing when I think about it xD

She became a fox animagus? Or something similar to that? Interesting

What a wonderful story. Wow. A great chapter, too!

I wonder if the spirit attuned her magic to nature even more

I wonder if she will be taught, or otherwise helped, somehow.

I'm excited for the next chapter

Oh, I just thought of a transfiguration tool! A cocoon! Like for a butterfly to undergo metamorphosis. That makes so much sense. At least, to me it does

"She was all alone." Aww, Hazel. That's so sad

Is your headcanon of what divination is similar to mine in that it's essentially a form of mind arts where they connect with the world instead of a person? I've seen it in one other fanfic too, or well, it was similar, at least

Marvolo. Interesting

That entity seems terrifying

Her staff just keeps getting cooler