|Reviews for Persona DC: Dream Children|
| FoxZei chapter 1 . 3/20/2020
This is really interesting. I'll apply for SYOC
name: Junyoung Choi
arcana: XX. Judgement
appearance: a tall boy with black wavy shoulder length hair and amber eyes. his skin is fair and he has a scar on the palm of his left hand
height: 150 cm
weight: 45 kg
summer outfit: he wears a blue and red striped t-shirt and shorts. he sometimes wear a blue cap. he also wears black converse shoes
winter outfit: he wears a white jacket with a black sweater underneath and a black scarf to match. he's wearing a pair of grey jeans and the same black converse shoes.
background: he and his younger twin was born to a pair in Seoul, South Korea. His parents wanted him to study so he could be a scientist, but he wanted to make music. When he was 8 his family moved to Kyoto, Japan.
desire: he wants to break free from the rules and expectations set up for him so he could make music
Dream Hole: A half-and-half dungeon where one half is a hybrid of a school and a prison, with shadows (cognitions?) are forced to stay in class or they will face their doom, and the other half a music stadium where he would preform.
Persona: Emil Sinclair (from Demian by Hermann Hesse)
Strong against: light/bless
weak against: dark/curse
weapon: a glaive
I can't wait for more of this book.
| Raygha Raikouga chapter 1 . 3/8/2020
This is pretty good plot, I don't mind seeing more of this.
| ArnoldStroong chapter 1 . 3/1/2020
Now this is what I call unique! instead of high schoolers or adults going out and about this, Children? I like this a lot! Expect a character real soon!
| ZygardeFusion chapter 1 . 2/28/2020
Hmm, this interests me! I think I’ll apply for an SYOC!
Name: Julius Arcus
Appearance: A slightly taller than average black-haired boy, with green eyes. Likes wearing any combination of green and black.
Height: 4’ 9”
Weight: 87 pounds
Summer outfit: A green shirt and black sweatshirt, with black pants and shoes.
Winter outfit: A neon-green coat with black sleeves, with black pants.
Personality: Is kind in general, but when provoked, can be incredibly angry and terrifying. Likes making jokes and singing (although he’s not the best at singing)
Background: A boy born into a rich family who wants to follow his own path and do what he wants. Tends to dislike his parents for the high expectations they have on him.
Dream Hole: A place where if you can think of a structure, it will be built. He wants the city to be full to represent his desire of doing what he really wants to do and leaving a legacy to accompany it.
Persona: King Arthur
Strong against: Bless and Physical
Weak Against: Curse and Ice
Weapon: Sword and Shield
Hope mine makes it in! Can’t wait to see what you write!
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