It was a pleasure to readthis story, thank you .
Still, why the duck, you had to go and make MC a vampire?
After reading that chapter my blood boiled hot enough to singe my chair and hit your face hard enough to cave it in

I had great fun, reading this story

Yeeeesssssssssss murliple SI is here oncr again! And it is fucking , halelujjiaj! The SBers cataloge is hereeeeee hype man,hpyeeeee

Lovely absolutely beautiful story, still have some grips about how OP Ariella is and how this story ended with a massive time skip and how easily the final villains were killed but still doesn’t change how I felt about the story and the emotions it made me feel.

Another story ruined

This was sweet. I was waiting for this ship to start setting sail :)

Holy fuck shits going buckwild. I figure theres not gonna be another dragonborn but maybe you'll probe me wrong

FUCK YES! I love this fic so much

I don't think ive left a review yet but holy shit i fucking love this fic so much. Its so interesting and i adore your take on everything Skyrim offers.

Meh. You just gotta ruin your story with this chapter. You think you are pulling a deadpool level of breaking the 4th wall but all you are doing is just turning the whole story into a DND story with 4 other writers in the story. This is just lame.

Well there it goes, down the gutter real quick

the guy is alla bout surviving or so he says, yet still do the most dangerous and stupid thing? is this really a self insert? more like a skyrim npc gained consciousness and some meta knowledge breaking the 4th wall...
His IQ fluctuate more then power level in a shounen manga...

(And considering he has knowledge of things happening this is even more braindeadfuckery)

I know it was written multple! SI! in the description bu t I hoped it was not hat cause it was phrased weirdly, You got one mAin charcter got his quest his motivation give it something unique by being a SI please just please make him be alone.
Several other just being players make it just waaay less interesting. i know the story is already complete so I am just rantiong but godamn.

So far everythign is good, the guy is being smart and geting better every day but just this "you got eyes on you" and making an army actually competent earning him enemies? FACH this is the biggets red flag of story telling if I know one, I hope to be proven wrong but something tell me the story will spiral down to the mud from there. Plkease no

Great story!

I only have a couple gripes.

First gripe, Alduin can't actually be killed in the mortal world according to canon. He has to be slain in Sovnegard so he doesn't just resurrect.

Second grip, I find it highly unlikely that vampires are fertile, although that one I would have to look up to be certain about.

Otherwise, this is a wonderful fanfic and I appreciate you giving us all the opportunity to read it.

Wow, this turned really fucking lame, really fucking fast.

Si vis pacem, para bellum would be more appropriate considering the Empire is inspired by Roma