Entertaining so far but your military ranks are completely out of whack. Private should be the lowest rank, not one of the highest, and you skipped promotions and got ranks completely reversed in order.

Imperial Legion ranks go as follows:
Private/Auxiliary
Quaestor
Quaestor Maximus (this one is fanon)
Praefect
Tribune/Captain (Tribune is a traditional Legion term; Captain appears more in Skyrim for fort or garrison leaders - functionally equivalent)
Centurion
Legate (Leads all Legion forces in a specific region (e.g., a hold in Skyrim). Coordinates war efforts, strategy, and logistics. Reports only to the General; commands multiple Tribunes/Captains.)
General

So you can see how ridiculous it is for the big honcho to be a "Private", and for the captain to be portrayed as being above a Legate.

And it is THIS point that I will be moving to a different story. I liked your writing i just dislike having ENEMIES being SI too. Three protagonists meeting after some work? Sure, five Self Insert characters two on an enemy side? No thanks.

The reason most people dislike multiple SI characters in any fanfic is typically it is too much. People like a singular protagonist and only one person to focus their attention on. It IS interesting and i like the idea mostly due to how MASSIVE skyrim is. In the game the dragon born wears SO fucking many hats. That means that there is ROOM for more people from our world. Although what i think you should do is split the story into three different ones. Each one interacting and touching the other but only when the other members would meet. People like to pay attention to only one protagonist as i said.

Time limit on the thuum also makes sense in real life. The thuum is a language used by dragons FOR dragons. Meaning a human throat is not meant to use the thuum that often. The SOUL of a dragon might make things easier but it wouldn’t keep you from suffering ill effects from using the thuum. The greybeards can only speak the thuum the way they do because of how ungodly long they have been practicing it. Dragonborn who has had the thuum for a few decades? That would have no time limit. But just killed your first dragon and learned a word of power? No way.

Okay your arguement that wards belong in alteration is dumb. Alteration is a school focused on ALTERING the state of things Oak, stone, and ebony flesh spells being literally altering your skin to have the properties of those materials.

The thing concering the use of the voice is that in a deul like what ulfric and Tirygg were in the use of the shout is frown opon and if the user learned it from the greybreads it is considered to be one of the highest disrespect of the nords traditions. Since Ulfric learned the voice from the greybreards he dishonored himself greatly ny using it in a deul

I wasnt sure with the college quest but I definitely thought it strange what happened with Ralof.

I'm a bit surprised that u haven't written the college and companion parts to this in other stories.

I think I dropped this story because I hadn't gotten into reading the Self Insert genre, even though this one was unique enough to catch my interest at the time. Now, I don't regret coming back and finishing this tale because WOW! What an amazing story you've written here. It makes me excited to read more of your other stories.

Thank you so much for the wonderful work you've done. I hope you're doing well!

Aaaand now I remember why I stopped reading this. I tried my best to ignore all the hints being given — hoping I was wrong — but this just ruins the story for me. Really sad too, since this is one of my favorite Elder Scrolls fanfics EVER.

Why would you throw so many transmigrators into a story and take away the focus of the ACTUAL MC? I don't mind SOME stories with multiple MC's (NOT Transmigrator or Reincarnators), but having a whole plethora of transmigrators — with foreknowledge of the world they are in — working out of the same setting is just ridiculously tedious.

In Druadach Igmund was walking in as a conqueror dictating terms to a surrendered insurgency. While I’m not going to call it anything but morally abhorrent, what was taken from the forsworn was in exchange for their lives.
In Rorikstead (a Whiterun Fief) he’s an invite guest in another Jarls hold under hospitality. Assaulting a local girl against is quite blatant violation of the laws of hospitality.
Unfortunately due diligence also requires that I point out the difference between pressuring her with his station vs. pinning her down and going at it. The later is a violation of hospitality that would see him branded a pariah and oathbreaker to all the other Jarls. The former is unfortunately an abhorrent “sign of the times.”

"I, of course, had no intention of actually doing it. I knew the answers that would be found there."

What a moron. Just five minutes ago you were thinking how this was a real world, and not the game. Now you think you have all the answers because of a game, so you're not going to bother to investigate for real? So stupid.

I loved the story. This is the only Skyrim story that I actually enjoyed reading. Keep up the good work

So hadvar is the worst si in this entire story and by far the weakest and he is just a slave to the legion it’s pretty annoying idk sorry I just felt the need to rant how useless I feel Hadvar has been compared to the rest of the OC/SI’s he is by far the weakest with no real redeeming quality

Jesus Christ it's incompetent. How ironic you can't spell that word correctly

Cool, but wanted to mention that Dragonskin is Tolfdirs own Spell he creates with the help of the Dragonborn bringing him heartscales after the dragons return.