in the anime and manga the fourth hokage's name is Minato namikaze and Naruto's mum's name is kushina but I like the names you put in the story.

really love this story can't wait for new chapters

For a story written in '03, with no actual details, you made up some pretty good shit

fuck minto and the village let it burn burn burn kill kill kill them all lol

2003 people 2003... grow up mongrels, stop hating on a story for unjustified reasons

this was made on 2003, stop hating the story lol

Kazama Arashi as well. Fuck. I only see Minato as Naruto father.

Sorry I’m dropping this. Haruka Uzumaki fr. I know you going AU. But I only see Kushina as Naruto mother.

fix your fucking margins

Wow this is old, I forgot we all used to have a bunch of theories about who his parents are. I haven’t heard the name Kazama Arashi for like 15 years and that makes me feel old. Did we even know about Kushina and Minato before shippuden? Ugg I just realized I’m in my mid twenties which makes me almost Kakashi’s age and older than Kushina and Minato were when they died... mind blown.

Seriously you started this story with an original story line, and then you took it to the lunacy side of stupid. You lost your thought pattern trying to create a different plot that it became nonsense. Listen create first your characters in your mind then write about them as you see them. Try to picture where you want them to go. Don't create your plot on the fly. Action, a little romance character exchange and for heavens sake ppl Fights! Let's not forget humor in the mix.

The story is dead to me

Yea I'm not reading something that's all in bold

So. This is a story I come back to time and time again. It was one of my first forays into the Naruto fandom, and continue’s to remain a favorite. It’s interesting, has a good plotline, and has a very diverse cast. It’s fun, and light-hearted and I love it.

Trash fic.