This story was so good

I absolutely loved it! Amazing!

Wow, hard to believe this is 14 years old. It was written before the books were every finished. I like that it was mostly dialogue. I feel like you really captured Draco. Most authors like to tie up all the loose ends but I’m glad you didn’t. It really keeps you thinking when there is “unfinished business”. I hope that wherever you are all these years later, that you still write.

Wow. on Ch 2 and this is super great! Great writing and I like how it is both really simple (I generally don't like short first-person sentences littered in the story, but you make it work because it really captures just how Draco is thinking) and really, really well done in capturing both a reader's interest and attention, and conveying the panic and flusteredness of the character.

I love this story.

awesome story. but…i have no idea why the punctuation is so confusion...

Briliant!

It's 2014 and this story is timeless. I have so much feels for ur characters. I like how harry love draco. Yea logically it's freaking stupid to love someone like draco but harry somehow made it feel like it was okay.

Ur draco is so bad but I wouldn't have him any other way in this story. Just like harry, I like him just the way he is. I think that speaks of ur skills as writer to make someone like Draco likeable.

I like how it was written too. Normally I don't but work in this story. This story will go to my fav list for sure.

I love that story and i have to say that i cried a lot over harry..

Overall pretty good, but the end is somewhat nonsensical. Just how could he go back to slaughtering innocent people with Harry being fine with it? And how did he gather Death Eaters when he was their number one target? And since he ended up 'giving up', what did he do with the Death Eaters?

But well, overall pretty cool. Although I did expect Crucio to be an animagus. Ill-intentioned or not. And I did expect Draco to give out more hints on the whereabouts of the Death Eater bases.

So sad to be reading this ten years after it was written. I hope positive reviews still get read and make you happy.

I loved this. The snappy banter made me laugh so many times. Ugh, I do hate they both killed so many people and that Draco did do some evil things. But you kind of made it bearable by deftly slipping in everything we needed to know to understand, but not excuse him.

I loved the cat. And his name!

Wow, I really did love this. I love how this whole fic was just mostly dialogue and I just loved it. Really. And I laughed when Draco pretend to be Harry's boyfriend when Hermione and Ron showed up, that was the best, because honestly Draco just keep making his life difficult and never knows when to shut the hell up. But it was brilliant, well done :).

Ugh. Draco... why are you so blind to your own feelings? Go after him, you twit!
This is so engaging!

This is so intense! Sorry I haven't reviewed any of the other chappies, but I've literally been glued to the screen. Also, I'm very pleased you started using quotation marks. :')
I feel like that's all I've commented on so far, but still... despite that, this is seriously so good! I'm thoroughly addicted. Bravo, indeed. :3

At the beginning of this chapter, I was a little skeptical of how this would turn out, what with the way this is syntactically structured and all. I mean, I typically don't go for stories that are written in first person and mistake quotation marks for apostrophes. However, I gave it a chance and was pleasantly surprised. This is actually quite interesting, and I'm excited to keep reading. And, also, I know you probably will disregard this review, since this story was written nearly 10 years ago, and you are now 10 years older.. but I felt like mentioning something anyway.