Reviews for Revolution |
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Lycoan2109 chapter 6 . 12/3 pretty weird that he thinks so much about the bandits but even after having Itachi as a friend and acknowledging that people are not manga characters and real he doesn't care much about Massacre in which actual people die. He is above genin level so i would expect some guilt as usually survivors do or a person who knows about it and has some power but not much will feel. people cannot be that clinical in real life hailing from our world which is relatively a lot peaceful than ninja world. but maybe thats just me looking for depth while the mc is scared of being noticed until he reaches a rank at least |
tomoe latsu chapter 50 . 9/29 ...mama mia, you are so close to finish, why did you stop writing this story? |
Espied7 chapter 1 . 8/27 Fun fic! Thanks for sharing. |
Guest chapter 42 . 6/20 That wasn't pleasant to read. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/9 No offense author, but why do you think having 'eat slug' as your MC's surname would make people interested in your story? Really. Stop for a second and think about it. Maybe, just maybe, you will figure out where you fucked up. |
AshFiend chapter 2 . 5/1 Well,.. that was fast |
oska24 chapter 7 . 4/12 lots of yapping fr |
soulreaper22 chapter 49 . 3/30 IMPORTANT: I found this story being posted on Webnovel and the s**tty author is posting it in parts and has a Patreon account for early access for money. Please mass report the Webnovel author on Webnovel and Patreon The name on Webnovel is Naruto : Domination by sybife and the Patreon account is sybife Webnovel: book/naruto-domination_28225377000017705 Patreon: sybife/collections |
soulreaper22 chapter 50 . 3/30 IMPORTANT: I found this story being posted on Webnovel and the s**tty author is posting it in parts and has a Patreon account for early access for money. Please mass report the Webnovel author on Webnovel and patreon Webnovel: book/naruto-domination_28225377000017705 Patreon: sybife |
JustDusty chapter 49 . 3/26 I really hope this is isn't dead. What an amazing story you have here. |
JustDusty chapter 37 . 3/26 And so it begins. Chilling. |
Noone chapter 13 . 3/11 Man, killing a jinchuriki no matter how would have led to a ninja war, but was treated nothing more than an interesting event. Didn't even explain what happened to the Matatabi. That was a deal breaker for me. |
1210justinp chapter 50 . 2/25 I really enjoyed the changes you made. |
F4d1ng-Sh4d0w chapter 50 . 2/7 WERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?! I HUNGER! But seriously good job can't wait for you to finally finish this story... wink wink |
Guest chapter 12 . 1/3 Dude isn't bringing a foreign jinchuuriki into enemy territory perceived as a declaration of war? |