Reviews for The Substitute Ladybug
Ern Estine 13624 chapter 3 . 4/19/2020
Looking forward for the next chapter
L Dominator chapter 3 . 4/18/2020
calerose chapter 3 . 4/18/2020
I love this so much and had some of the same fears as mMari after the last chapter. I love the solution that Sabine comes up with to help the public understand without knowing too much. Awesome writing.
JuliaFC chapter 3 . 4/18/2020
This is a very well thought out chapter. I liked the description of the battles and marinette's dilemma is very realistic. Well done and keep writing xxx
CaptainMalcolmReynolds chapter 3 . 4/18/2020
Oh... I really enjoy how realistic this is towards Marinette's feelings. I'm glad you're back. I love that she's thinking of having a full-time snake miraculous in the background even after she's returned.
Sonochu chapter 3 . 4/18/2020
This is kind of an odd problem for Marinette to have. The obvious solution is just to keep using Second Chance even after Ladybug's return. I mean I guess it's risky and shouldn't be used for minor reasons, but it already is. The miraculous was given to a girl with a broken leg who can easily be defeated and her miraculous stolen if found out, and the reason she's using it in the first place is to not give Hawkmoth any ideas.

The only change when Ladybug returns would be that the snake holder could be more competent in a fight. So really I don't see much of a problem here. Just continue to use the snake.

Otherwise I'd love the story to focus more on Mrs. Cheng and Chat. They have an interesting dynamic with her trying to act like the parental figure he should've had while also assessing his relationship with Marinette and teasing him on it. I want to see them interact on their patrols sans Marinette and potentially even deal with some of the issues his partnership with Ladybug has had.
Kira007Goddess of Chaos chapter 3 . 4/18/2020
Love it
AliceCullen3 chapter 3 . 4/18/2020
anonymousfriend27 chapter 3 . 4/18/2020
Well this was an expected surprise! I woke up this morning with a lovely email telling me this had updated, and spent the entire time grinning :3

Great chapter!
yellow 14 chapter 3 . 4/18/2020
Eh, I don’t think Alya’s been akumatised that much. She’s been akumatised twice in canon (which isn’t that unusual. Max, Nino, Juleka, August, Aurore, Sabrina, Mr Ramirez and Chloé have all been akumatised two or more times.)

Very good, keep updating
KaliAnn chapter 3 . 4/17/2020
I really liked the mother and daughter talk. It helped center Marinette.
Adena McGee chapter 3 . 4/17/2020
Oh poor Marinette! Anyone in her position would feel the same way. How disheartening. Especially when she has done so much for Paris. But I’m glad that Sabine gave her a good compromise idea and that she can come back from this set back just as strong and in good spirits.
writeringoodfaith chapter 3 . 4/17/2020
I thought it was super cute how distressed Adrien was when they dared conclude that Ladybug was the weakest link hehe. It was a great chapter! Didn’t mind the delay at all, I fell right into your immersive world straight away. :D
MythGirl Writes chapter 3 . 4/17/2020
I was wondering if people would wonder about the effectiveness of Cocinelle, but I'm glad Marinette and Sabine sorted that out easily enough. Hopefully things will get easier and not harder as time passes!
Silvanon of the Orchard chapter 2 . 4/15/2020
Oof, crashes involving deer can be really bad, I'm glad it sounds like you're ok, even if your car wasn't! Also, awesome story! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!
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