script format is cancer, die in a fire.

Small and trash chapter

I enjoyed reading it btw

At this point I’m not sure if the author enjoys arguments and is doing it on purpose or if they really have the mentality of a child.

Maybe it’s both. Also, some people will favorite and follow stories just for the sake of it. It’s called bots idiot.

Wow, super amazing writing there. So creative 10/10 no fake

Mr/Ms Redundantchosen1 If this was so cringe why does the overall fic(all Twelve oneshots) in general have at least Four favorites and and Four Follows? I don't understand you people some of you complain that I write conversations in dialogue format and some of you (like you for example) complain that I don't write enough dialogue,and hey I'm on here to recieve critisizm so thank you for your review even if you're trying to make me feel like less of a writer because at the end of the day no writer(fanfiction or otherwise) can improve without critisizm no matter how harsh said critisizm is.

This is all pretty cringe, with grammar and punctuation not existing, "dialogue" being forced and out of character, and cliches that are just godawful.

Sir, this is a Wendy's.

OK boomer.

If you don't want any criticism then why post a story on an online forum? Also you seem to have some ego problems, lol btw your fic sucks lmao xD pepe hands, jebaited!

gr8 b8 i r8 8/8

This is a preemtive warningTo any and all who decide to comment on this fic if you hurl personal insults at me pertaining to my fanfiction writing style or any and every other kind of personal writing habits of mine I will ignore you and also possibly delete your comments and if you are a fanfiction user I'll blacklist you from reading any of my fics but if you're not a user and just a guest well every dog gets their day so I'll leave it to people who cross paths with you to pass their judgement onto you and I personally truly hope it hurts if you happen upon this story and you aren't a troll be sure to take this seriously and not laugh at me for leaving a review on one of my own stories.