I am seeing a theme for all your future conflicts. And I dont like that theme. I hate hostage situation and I think they are overdone. And to see you setting stage for another one whe we just had one 2-3 chapters back makes me hate it. I cant read anymore since ther are too many things that doesn't stand right with me.

Especially a sensor of Naruto's caliber not checking to make sure jaques the man who kidnapped and mind rped his wife, is dead(Dont deny it, I can see future plot involving him coming back from dead).

This like these frustrates me, especially since this is so nicely written that it makes them stand out. If it was subpar work I might have not cared about them but for a work of this caliber having these things doesn't smell like it mistake. But it feels like intentionally done to set some stage but not caring about how you excute it. Its like you have some grand plot in your mind but you don't care how you reach it, so you force it.

This chapter felt so cartoonish. Villians and heroes monologuing. Capable heroes(warriors) making kiddy mistakes. Only thing trumping this in stupidity would be jaques coming back alive later in chapters cause they didn't make sure that he had died.

This chapter is so much of mistakes made by excellent warriors that it reek of forced plot progression. Naruto I can understand since despite being powerful he is scatterbrained. But others, smh.

i can totally see naruto and thomas being buddies later on down the line

is it bad i really want an omake of kushina or tsunade meeting narutos kids and in turn spoiling them rotten

THIS IS AWESOME!

…wait… they drag poor tyrian and the (unfortunate) scientists into this mess don’t they?

Also, yeah. Chapters are appearing-ish for me again so I’m not sure whats going on anymore.

Regardless, theres about to be a lotta bodies in the future huh.

I love that Tyrian always finds the metaphorical koolaid… and chugs that shit religiously.

Also, did you double post or am I STILL having issues?

Stop claiming theses are naruto when your constantly changing his whole personality at the rate your going you might as well say this is a oc with narutos name

thanks for the update. I would like this to be updated weekly if you can

the oh so long awaited time skip, i can't wait

Great chapter Neon looking forward to more of this story.

im rooting for weekly

Oooh boy trouble

thank you for the update neon. look forward to the next