Very nice so far

"... the players that came before must have had human avatars. They had to have been young and played into the whole heteromorphic hunting meta from before .."

It will be interesting to see his reaction when he finds out that this assumption of his is wrong and that one of those players was in fact a skeletal overlord. That fact alone makes the whole Slane Theocracy religion and human supremacy ideology make even less sense. It went from a half dozen "gods", including an undead one, taking pity on an endangered human species that was too weak to protect itself and turned into ideology of "it's the will of the gods that humans are superior to all other species and should rule the world." Seriously, it's like the fact that they worship an undead just goes over their heads or gets ignored.

Love

This is seriously fun to read. Though I do wish I could find a way to convince you to write up a lemon or two and share them on the discord, if you can't share them here. Oh well. Those succubi though.

write more plz. 10/10

i feel like david is the exasperated elder social-fu master trying and failing to teach suzuki the green and oblivious apprentice of social-fu who was forced to be the emperor due to court shenanigans.

Quite interesting indeed here.

I know you haven't updated this in quite a while, but just in case you do I'll leave some words for you.

This story is lovely to read.
I usually skip over much of the content in these fanfictions, due to them always being similar to one another.
I read every word of this one.

No lemons? Perfection. Fanfics with even a little lemon tend to be third rate at best. At least to me.

I also enjoy a more non-combat oc and this scratches that itch quite well.

I am however a little worried about his artificer class. I don't mind having an op crafting class that can churn out higher quality equipment and trinkets, but I'm worried he'll end up becoming some sort of crafting Messiah where everything he makes is just oh so much better.

It's good that you're letting him have his own lines during the moments that happen in cannon, instead of just repeating ainzs' lines for himself.

I'm not very good at reviews or even feedback so I'll leave it here.

Solid so far
Interesting character
Enough change to let you know this is its' own story and not cannon

I failed English but
Spelling looks fine
Grammar at the very least isn't so bad even I'd notice it
10/10 from me my guy
Keep on keeping on

Interesting and fun!

How long do you plan to have the Theocracy fooled? There are Theocracy collaborators among Re-Estize nobles, and nobles who sell information to the Empire. If Ganzaf returns alive, the illusion cover story would be blown. Also, wanting your presence to remain hidden for as long as possible is contradictory to spreading your name of Ainz Ooal Gown. I also think using this name is risky. What if there are enemies from Yggdrasil who also got transported here? A better option is to use something only the guild members know as an alias, such as an inside joke that nobody outside the guild knows. What would be a method to locate the supposed lost guild members if they seek out Ainz? Attract them to the fake Nazarick? Carne village? This is a plot hole in the canon. I like how the two supreme beings operate together. Ainz is like the field agent, while Baphomet is like an operator directing and reporting from behind the scenes. The hands acting in concert with the eyes.

nice to see this updated.
though how things will diverge with Baphomet's 'spy tower' and other abilities will be something i'll look forward too

Does your tablet not have a Ctrl key on the touchpad? Ctrl Z should undo the last input, but I have a feeling you already knew that, or that other reviews pointed this out. Oopsie.

Anyways, I like where the story is heading so far, but I hope it deviates from canon more than the usual. Most OC stories usually have it be canonOC, with a few quips, mentions, actions, or NPCs that inevitably doesn't effect anything in the long term, with the story ending up predictable despite the vastness that the new world offers. I like the deviation of him answering questions for them so far, hopefully it alters their actions in the future, however slight, to something new.

Now, onto the next chapter!

The chapter is ok, although there was nothing really original so far. If the story will be mostly the same, but without some minor mistakes that Ainz makes, which later will be taken as part of his master plan all along, I don't know if I'll enjoy it. It might be better if your OC and his mistresses were to go on their own. Maybe insert themselves in someone's ruling council and slowly take some country from the inside. Perhaps the Slane Theocracy will be best for that. Or something like that. Illusions can be pretty effective, and him being an artificer and good with intelligence gathering, things like that can be fun and easy for him. Being a demon might push him in this direction as well. That is just my advice.

There were some mistakes that I found and you might want to fix:

"Mononga said as he noticed Sebas walk into the room holding a tray." - It should be Momonga

"Baphomet replied as he looked back to the mirror of remote viewing that Mononga had started using again." - same

Mononga nodded as he started moving the view in the mirror in the direction stated. - same

Mononga and Baphomet shared a short look. - same

Mononga said as he finished Baphomet's statement. - same

Mononga waited patiently until it appeared that Shana had finished giving her report to her creator before speaking. - same

"Luring out a target?" Mononga mused out loud. - same

"Hmmm… yes, indeed they do." Mononga agreed as he processed the situation as they currently understood it. - same, also it should be "understand" because it's in the present tense.

Mononga put a hand to his skeletal chin. - same

"He quickly moved the view back over to the small village Momonage and Albedo were in." - again, it should be Momonga

"Whoever is watching them is an amatuer" - amateur

There might be more mistakes, but those are the ones I found while reading casually.

Anyway, see you in the next update. Hopefully, it won't take you too much time. Stay in good health.

I need your voyage thingy story

This is an interesting story that you’ve got here, with what I think is an interesting take on a supreme being OC. Looking forward to the next chapter.