Reviews for GrimmFall: Conquest of Hookocho
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12
I wanted to know about the adventures of that story and what happen to Bismuth?
nightmaster000 chapter 10 . 8/6
Another fantastic chapter, with new characters coming into play in the Foster family. :)

Starting off just LOVE that song sequence really great touch and perfect song for this story too. I've always loved a musical touch and good to see it pop up in GrimmFall now and again.

Now thanks to some quick acting from Koosy Dee Dee is back in her universe though right in the middle of Washington DC. Let's hope Major Glory is in town or something as she's going to need help against Hookocho's forces and plans.

Speaking of which while Dee Dee has escaped his clutches for now he's far from calling it quites, as his next move is target someone else with a special Semblance that channels their universe enter Mac Foster.

Oh can't wait to see what trouble and action comes from this twist.

Back on the Koosland homefront really enjoyed that entire scene with Bismuth and Koosy as they make a game plan, that ends with a statement that I can't help but find ominous that Bismuth will do whatever it takes to keep her friends safe.

How far will she go to keep this vow I wonder? I certainly look forward to finding out and seeing what happens next.
GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON chapter 10 . 8/6
Cool to see new familiar faces and Mac adopted by France? That’s interesting, wonder what became of his brother? Also a chameleon Faunus? That’s cool, wonder if he has scales or a tail to confirm it, and had the rabbit Herriman was seen he would’ve been mistaken for a Mobian. And her grandma met Stan? Can picture how that would happen lol

And look forward to how bismuth will pull this off with being invisible to imaginary friends, wonder if we see any others from the show.
D.N.Works chapter 10 . 8/5
So Dee Dee isn't the only one, with other like Mac and Bloo being like her. So Foster Home for imaginary friend is getting involved, which makes sense. Nice idea having them involved.
merendinoemiliano chapter 10 . 8/5
Quite nice introspection
nightmaster000 chapter 9 . 7/11
A most excellent chapter as we see that events of Conquest of Hookocho start to progress past the ending of Hail Crom.

Though whether or not this leads to other villains and heroes playing a role in response to Hookocho's threat remains to be seen.

That said loving how Pearl's unwanted blast from the past in her confrontation with her former "owner" White Diamond played out. Oh the drama there with White Diamond sadistically seeing everything the Rebellion, and Rose's actions as a sick twisted game.

One she is apparently looking forward to seeing how it finally ends, and seeing "Pink" face the consequences of her actions. Apparently despite everything one thing that's remaining the same from canon is White either not realizing Steven isn't Pink Diamond, or believing that she still exists.

But on the truth being revealed really looking forward how things will play out when Steven and everyone else learns the truth of Rose Quarts and Pink Diamond. And I don't think it's going to end up tied up as well or peacefully as canon to say the least.

On another note Steven thanks to Wirt knows about what Bill Cipher is and his dark intentions for their reality. Though Wirt has also reminded and told him to currently focus on the current threats of Hookocho and the Cluster while Bill's other enemies stand in his way.

Bill is indeed a danger that shouldn't be forgotten but the other threats it seems currently take priority right now it seems.

All together wonderful chapter and on a last note love the feeling of fear of the future and the secrets held White Diamond left Pearl with.
GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON chapter 9 . 7/11
White thinks she’s got it in the bag but feels like she’s been played with by Bill and not to mention others will be on to her little game with the elementals. Plus with Canaletto in the game, wonder if bill knows he’ll have trouble with the Lord of Chaos of his own plans forthe universe when he breaks out as well.
D.N.Works chapter 9 . 7/11
Well this was a shock, especially for Pearl. Man, secrets are just being thrown around Al right. But looks like they may just be revealed. Though not before Steven and the others save Dee Dee.
merendinoemiliano chapter 9 . 7/10
Interesting chapter
nightmaster000 chapter 8 . 6/25
A great chapter as we see Dee Dee and Bismuth make their escape from Hookocho's space fortress. The question now is where they will retreat to, and what kinda of plan will they make?

We see Steven and Wirt meet more officially at last, and Steven learning more of his family from his uncle as well. Who is certainly explaining and handling things better on this front than Greg did in canon.

Anyway Steven not only learns he has aunt and cousins but also learns a bit more about his dad and uncle Wirt's past at least in regards to their own family.

Though a more serious topic now comes up with Bill Cipher, and it looks like that Steven might soon learn just who his former body jacker is.

We also some great subplot coming into play with Pearl's old memories of before she became Pink Diamond's Pearl and was White instead, much to her shock and horror. The situation only growing worse when some unwanted faces from the past show up in Bill, who's doing a favor serving as a means for White Diamond to contact Pearl personally it seems.

Oh now this quite a twist and turn of events indeed, and quite eager to see what will come from this confrontation, and just how it will play out.

Will Pearl's find a way out of this or will she find herself once more under White Diamond's control?
merendinoemiliano chapter 8 . 6/25
Very good introspection, curious to see what changes this will give to the Gems subplot and their abilities. See you soon. But really Huntsmen and soldiers are forbidding from killing? There should be at least a few objective with a 'shoot on sight' order, like Hoss Delgado or Satyra 'S high ranking members.
D.N.Works chapter 8 . 6/24
Oh yeah, go Bismuth! Looks like she's as good as she remembred, saving Dee-Dee! With Steven meeting his good old uncle, though sadly he brings news of another being Bill. All while Pearl learrns the horrible truth of her history, and is facing her old Diamond after so long. Shocker!
Guest chapter 7 . 6/17
I like to see more of that story please.
GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON chapter 7 . 5/28
Oh so this takes place during the Crom crisis! Now it makes sense! Wow didn’t expect that. And must’ve been a pain for Amethyst to find out hey could’ve used easier transport across the world than just use the warp pads. But they did spent the maturity of their time in the temple without actually keeping up with some events of the world.

Wait til bismuth finds out the truth behind rose.
merendinoemiliano chapter 7 . 5/27
Very cool fight, you portrayed the war very well and curious to see what Bismuth will create for her teammates using Earth's technology or eventually injecting herself with Dust (which may work also for trolls and Gargoyles)
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