Reviews for Game of Thrones: The Targaryen Awakens |
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![]() ![]() ![]() É sempre ruim quando aegon não vai se casar com danny, eu sempre imagino que a magia da casa dos dragões impedia o lado ruim da consanguinidade, e aerys só ficou louco porque estava sendo atormentando por algum troca de pele. |
![]() ![]() Moral preaching from the whore for the punishment for the Lannisters and the pairing Jon/Margaery, everything else was great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only at the beginning and there's a lot wrong with this right here. I have a lot to say but I have to say you're thoughts on the war are just plain wrong and completely ridiculous. If it suddenly came out Rheagar did not infect kidnap Lyanna the north wouldn't of suddenly gone "oh well that's okay then let's go home" that's utter stupidity. Most people that think that are deaf to what actually seemed to happen you know the part where the mad king KILLED BOTH LORD AND HAIR TO THE STARKS! they would most definitely continued the war they would of most definitely tried to murder the mad king the only thing that would happen is they may have a thought and split decision whether they should continue following rob or switch to Rheagar on the promise he made Jon(using this as your name for him is ridiculously stuck in our modern way of thinking) king or they'd fight to make him king maybe joining with dorne on the promise Elia and her children are returned to dorne but that's a big if. So no the north wouldn't of suddenly dropped the war like you and most the fandom thinks |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is a mixed bag to the core a lot I wanted to say about the count, Jon, the ridiculously short training time but it all fell through with one simple thing... Kylo ren... Really? Made him look like the dumbest "sith"(he's not a sith) in history kylo ren... Absolutely F tier in looks department as as intimidating as a plush bunny rabbit. So many other far more intimidating helmet's and armour to pick from and you go manchild ren kiddo ren the baby with a bad temper tantrum. Yeesh... Oh well easy to ignore but I will never find this character scary and each time he acts intimidating I'll just laugh thinking about that ridiculous outfit |
![]() ![]() I wish this fanfic had some lemons in it but it was good all the same I might read it again one day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story is ruined to much bashing and stupid theory you came up with could have just kept the world how it was and not make an annoying AU. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapters good so far yet you bring it down with bashing it proves authors can't write realistic character reactions other than bashing and i hope he won't say both last names that would be cringe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Execute Order 66 xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story, quite a bit. The spelling and grammar leave a lot to be desired, though. Character names are 50-50 as to whether they're spelled correctly or not. I'm barely familiar with ASOIAF and even I know how to spell the character's names... Like, how many times was 'Rheagar' in this story? Or 'Holster' Tully? At least the main cast are mostly correct. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like where this story is going... I don't like when one of the characters has their name mis-spelled... 31 times. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A truly enjoyable story, amd one I am glad to have read. I only ask, for the love of GRR Martin and JRR Tolkien both, please run it through a word processor and check the grammar and language. Parts of it were really difficult to read and I admit to skipping whole paragraphs out of frustration. The fact that I finished it despite that should tell you how good the story itself is, it just deserves to be polished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I noticed something most unusual. though you used the words correctly at first, you suddenly started swapping around then and than. for reference, then refers to a sequence of events, than compares things. There are also a few other grammatical errors that bear fixing. That having been said, the story is compelling and I am enjoying it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NICE! A great story for sure and love that it was Dooku who was the leading factor to this change. Also, Kudos for pairing our hero with Magery. Thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Outstanding end to an amazing story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I really love Catelyn's punishment. |