Kat isn't just feeling fear, the c**t is ffs jealous of Jon's skills compared to her Son Robb's... That is the case in canon GoT as well. I've always been disturbed that she gets away with all the shit she heaps on Jon, always wanted to read a fanfic where she and her bitch of a Septa got taken to task over their actions...

Good job so far, really enjoy reading it. But it think you're leaning too hard on blaming Arryn for everything. I mean the mad king was well still mad, Rhaeagar would've still left with Lyanna according to this time line(prophecy or love reasons). So honestly the war was coming eventually. I don't mind arryn and robbie being the bad guys, but I hope Jon is more introspective and realize that they are the bad guys, but the war was long time coming either way. The mad king was simply the catalyst for everything to blow.

I think you need to establish why Robert want the throne in the first place. He never wanted it in the original and only reluctantly to became king "for the good of the realm". I don't mind you kind of painting Jon and Robert as worse than the original with more nefarious thoughts, but I don't understand where the "need" for Robert to become King comes from? He like to whore around and drink, but being a King is a lot of responsibility, he wouldn't desire it himself. Even if you're insinuating Jon is manipulating Robert to become King, Robert himself doesn't have much motivation anyways, he doesn't actually care about power but rather what he can obtain from said power (which is whores, drinks, and fights). Again I think if you're going to deviate, Roberts motivation for going along as far as willing to kill Lyanna (in this case I think ur establishing he doesn't love her and just like the idea of having her) , what's driving him to go so far. He still cares about Ned as a brother right, so what's making him essentially backstabbing his long time bro? Just saying.

300? Wtf it should be 3000 so we arnt completely jacking off the MC

I finally found this story again after searching for it for awhile.
Gotta say I'm just as impressed with it as I was the first time.

Loved the relationship between Margaery and Aegon. Loved how brave and compassionate you portrayed them to be.
Loved the battles and bloodiness.

Well written

Yeah fuck u Ned. Weak ass piece of trash that would happily kneel for Robert and do anything he says. My god even in canon Ned was pathetic.

*Ignites lightsaber*
"Armies won't work, Jon."

Everytime Aegon says "Jon" I picture him as Gorefield lol.

How exactly are they going to control the dragons in the future without purer valryian blood either he has to marry daenerys or culls his dragons before he dies and Margery has no magic blood, martell or valeron would be a safer bet

This was a fun read. I liked how you used Dooku and how he influenced Jon. So many stories and fics have sith as blood-thirsty monsters. Dooku used the dark side as a tool he didn't give in to it like Sidious or Vader, while he was no Jedi he wasn't the traditional sith.

Die Tyrells bieten die machthungrige Maergery jedem an der auf dem Eisernen Thron Königinnenmaterial.

Schade das die Geschichte zu Ende war großartig trotz der falschen Frau an seiner /Dany war auch sehr gute paarung.

Mag den machtvollen ist lahm und langweillig und passt nicht zu Aegon.

Fair warning, its pretty cringey. It's a shallow power fantasy fic, no real substance and very little understanding of the source material.

This fic is mid. Nothing interesting happens, it just ‘mastermind’ Jon plans everything to perfection, thats it. There is no flair in this story. Read to pass the time.