Please update. Always liked the master of death fics, but you’ve made the MOD actually have powers

Really enjoying both this and Rising From the Ashes. Thank you for sharing them.

I love this story i cant wait to read more

lol. poor Harry, wish he looked older so he could drink and not get yelled at for looking 16.

Jesus, feel better now you've forced the kid to bleed all over because you jumped down his throat guys.

Please continue!

Good start to a great story. keep up the good writing ...

Good read thank you
Would like more please would like to know what happens next

Seriously the way they are treating him is messed up. he really shouldn't put up with it. the story is still pretty good though just needs more updates.

firebolt is unbreakable

I don't usually review on my phone, as I have trouble signing in on my phone. But I just had to comment on how much I enjoyed your first chapter. Everyone was mostly in character, and you didn't have Harry usurp the real roles of the Avengers. Instead, he had his own heroic moments until he hooked up with them, and after that he joined in a team effort.

And don't be embarrassed to call fanfiction literature. It is just as much "literature" as commercial fiction. The only difference is one is created for money and the other is made for love.

I likely won't review again until I finish, unless I get to read a few chapters on my desktop. I look forward to the rest of the story.
dreamflower02

please continue

It’s fun, and I’ve been enjoying it so far. One recommendation, think about swapping out the general tag for family instead, that story is doing really well with leaning into the found family feelings.

Just asking why Harry is wearing glasses when you had him fix his eyes in chapter 1. Other than that mistake, good story so far. Can't wait for more.

I wondered how I had missed an Avengers/HP cross-over as I think I’ve read most of them… but after trying this story, I think I had previously been lucky…

The background that Harry has been given here doesn’t match at all with his actions or his interactions with the Avengers… honestly, Harry’s magical abilities are about as good as they were in fourth year… he is nowhere near as competent as he was in even fifth year… he supposedly has extensive training and experience, and yet his combat capabilities are pathetic.

Then he’s somehow neutered of magic at the end of the battle so that the Avengers can simply demand anything they want?! WTH?

This could have possibly been a decent story, but there is absolutely no thought being given to plot or realistic character interaction. Maybe the author just wanted to force certain things to happen and was too lazy to develop a plot to get there, but this is not for me.