Good read thank you
Would like more please would like to know what happens next

Seriously the way they are treating him is messed up. he really shouldn't put up with it. the story is still pretty good though just needs more updates.

firebolt is unbreakable

I don't usually review on my phone, as I have trouble signing in on my phone. But I just had to comment on how much I enjoyed your first chapter. Everyone was mostly in character, and you didn't have Harry usurp the real roles of the Avengers. Instead, he had his own heroic moments until he hooked up with them, and after that he joined in a team effort.

And don't be embarrassed to call fanfiction literature. It is just as much "literature" as commercial fiction. The only difference is one is created for money and the other is made for love.

I likely won't review again until I finish, unless I get to read a few chapters on my desktop. I look forward to the rest of the story.
dreamflower02

please continue

It’s fun, and I’ve been enjoying it so far. One recommendation, think about swapping out the general tag for family instead, that story is doing really well with leaning into the found family feelings.

Just asking why Harry is wearing glasses when you had him fix his eyes in chapter 1. Other than that mistake, good story so far. Can't wait for more.

I wondered how I had missed an Avengers/HP cross-over as I think I’ve read most of them… but after trying this story, I think I had previously been lucky…

The background that Harry has been given here doesn’t match at all with his actions or his interactions with the Avengers… honestly, Harry’s magical abilities are about as good as they were in fourth year… he is nowhere near as competent as he was in even fifth year… he supposedly has extensive training and experience, and yet his combat capabilities are pathetic.

Then he’s somehow neutered of magic at the end of the battle so that the Avengers can simply demand anything they want?! WTH?

This could have possibly been a decent story, but there is absolutely no thought being given to plot or realistic character interaction. Maybe the author just wanted to force certain things to happen and was too lazy to develop a plot to get there, but this is not for me.

Started well. But it's turning into bullshit. It has 5 useless chapters without adding anything to the story other than very simple dialogues where HP and the rest of the team didn't even get anywhere with it.

Harry started out as a marked but mature person and suddenly became a tomboy. And this nightmare thing, I think you're saying that everyone is sensitive, and for someone who's been dealing with death since he was 11, I think it's kind of dubious not to have gotten over it. In fact, he doesn't even have nightmares about Sirus' death, just guilt and anger.

Anyway out of nowhere HP was changed to a teenager and acting like one. And I think almost no one here in the fanfiction has read HP books, because HP is 185 cm tall, not as tall as Ron; It's not my fault if the interpreter in the movies is short and Ron's own interpreter was also short and nobody talks about malnutrition for the Ron.

They always invent malnutrition this and that, but the abuse at Dursley was much more verbal than physical, with some work slightly exaggerated, but not a slave as many make it seem and yes HP was punished at some points in his life with low food, but no was starved to death as it is always described and being beaten by a fat cousin who is 1 month older than you during childhood is not even close to being considered a beating, HP may have taken a beating or two and even got hurt from it, but surely if it had been something routine it would have been impossible to have gone unnoticed.

Coming back to the fact that you turned HP into a teenager again, it's very exaggerated, since he's a guy of almost 30 years old if he follows the date in the Avengers movies, if I'm not mistaken 2008/2009 in the invasion of NY. And I don't know why this thing that if you gather the deathly hallows you stop aging, kind of silly.

It seems to me that you will - copy the plot of other HP/Avengers stories and put a lot of childish humor in between. Nothing new in this.

It's literature if someone wants to read it.

The best Reason to believe him.

So glad to see this fic is ongoing, it’s one that brings me so much joy . Can’t wait for an update (when you’ve got time anyways)

Love it

Lol this is funny!

"stack of parchment and a ballpoint pen "
you can't WRITE on parchment with a ballpoint pen
can't he get a $30 student grade fountain pen? he's rich, get a Mont-Blanc and sign the surrender of the Lusatania or whatever.