i loved this fic before so ima read it again. i already know im disappointed in the sequel but still, the OG is peak.

didnt even mean to open this 1 was a misclick and decided might as well give chapter 1 a go n boy am I happy I did this is fucking amazing

Very nice story so far. Very enjoyable

Stupid fucking faggot, why give him a potentially broken skill if you’re just gonna have him act like a pussy bitch. Like fuck off give your balls a tug and go kill some people, take their shit, and stop worrying about nonsensical shit.

Got to love when the MC thinks of himself as "smart" but in reality is just Stupid. Wtf is he even hiding for, like what he thinks its going to stand for long or he is some Superman Fan.

Was the dialogue between pain and thread yahiko based on Anakin ? Lmaooo

Konan's bloodline or whatever it was seems so useful for an archivist

So mc didn't activate Glow once while zetsu followed them? Because no way he could evade that dojutsu
Also why isn't there a seal legion that can capsized a boat? It should be a priority, so only ninja could even try to come (i don't know if chunin have enough chakra to make the trip, tho with good planning genin would make it rn)
Also why isn't mc spamming Swift release? With his more than Peak human body and making the sign inside his body (so no one could try to predict), he should be too fast to react to for anyone without hack eyes
Also mc had hashirama's cells, and orochimaru's memory but didn't use edo tensei to learn sage mode? At least use it to learn how to use the mokuton jutsu he created...

You make experience too much of a factor in fight, Naruto and others won against most S rank and their experience didn't save them for shit, kakuzu would have been dogwalked by Kakashi if he didn't have a weird ass technique, same for asuma and hidan

Didn't Hinata at 19 have a 20km range? Momoshiki could see things country away, 1km is probably the limit until the user eye has finished growing and then it expand more..
Also didn't mc get sasori's memories? He should know what pain was told and so should have prepared for it, not leaving a clone was also dumb as hell..
Hidan is inconsequential against mc but fu might have a little problem
Kakuzu should get rolled over
Fu trained with shadow clones since she was a child, she honestly should be better then end of Shippuden Naruto in his base and Kurama shroud form, senjutsu should still gives him the edge but barely

Why did you nerf mc ? With Glow he should be able to SEE lifeforce so the core of sasori should have been gone much quicker, mc should also be able to see between clones and be the only one who can distinguish shadow clones from the Originals(except Madara but no one know how he doesn't it), he could also use Glow to make distraction and hide his chakra for ambushes
Instead he had a harder time than Sakura and chiyo while having a lot of Trump card that he used for not much gains (lava, not being poisoned,crystal)
If fu could learn lightning chakra flow she would have made short work of deidara too since she can extand kusanagi and make the distance moot
Is Gaara's Sand release the same as magnet release? Because mc could ask for a little blood with what he gave to suna for free...

Also i Hope they left a clone on the island this time..or give more Heart to the whale clone so they can make shadow clones to tell mc if something happen or act themselves by making threads clones which are essentially mc himself

Sasori using the shapeshifting technique now sounds like bullshit, it seemed more like something pain would tell others to do to help another group escape or finish something

Mc could cure itachi no? Tho don't see why he would, unless he need his eyes for the eternal mangekyo later(of course he'll find a way to trigger it for his own)
Where is Karin right now?
And wasn't there an island base of Orochimaru with another Uzumaki? I think they worked on creating the ultimate summon or some others nonsense

Mc should leave a threads clone with a Heart on the island whenever he goes away, seems logical
Wasn't the wasabi family the one in a filler where tobirama's Sword was used? Mc should get that aoi guy
Mc should get a yamanaka and then won't have to take all the memories of everyone and just search for what he wants..
Also maybe hashirama died while being a sage so senjutsu could also be a requirement to absorb it, getting a white zetsu would be easier

What happened to the future team taka? Were they in another base?I don't know when Karin was recruited so was she already away from grass?
Also he was in wave but didn't plunder haku and kurikiribocho ?

Will mc save Karin in sasuke's place? She could be a good Friend, if this was a more dark story, a good experiment..
She has 3 differents abilities from her family and all are top tier lol(her sensing, her chains, whatever her blood being an all purpose healing aid is)