Only problrm is harry using the killing curse he would never its taken too much from him

P.S. Sorry for the spelling errors, it wasn"t intentional, I should have checed first. Apologis.

Thisis oe fntaxtus story and one I will read again and again, I love your characters, and using others rather thn tge Golen , Trio, I thi,k using Michael, , Ms zBelmont and Neville As well as the Greengrass Sisters and the others as primary players is astroke oters genius, Personally I think JK Rowling will wish she wrote this on, Well done on a great story, I feel privilage to have rean this,

I dont get why you are doing this Author.. They already know that Voldermort has Horcrux no? If I am not losing my mind, all of them know he has Horcrux... So the only thing Dumbledore could show Harry is how much there are.

Harry keeps talking for people to say Voldermort's name, only for them to die when the name turned up Taboo again... That's why they dont say his name, because when they say, snatcher's come to kill them...

I feel like we’re getting a lot of the same plot retold and dragged out right over the last half a dozen chapters. Every chapter, a bit of filler as Michael talks about building his Ironman suit, a reminder that Sirius is stressed because war and family. The kids wondering about one or both of two mysteries we, the readers, already know about, being the Chamber of Secrets and Horcruxes. And then a couple lines to remind us this is a story about Harry.

It’s making chucks of the story, which has been a blast to read, completely skippable. To be honest, I’ve already started scrolling down whenever I see it’s a Michael scene because I know nothing of importance is happening.

I don’t understand why they’re all trying to figure out these “anchors” when Dumbledore told them about the horcruxes in the 1st book. Your series is very good but this is a huge continuity issue imho.

There is no black smoke when you apparate

there is no fucking way that harry potter a kid stands a chance against voldy who has like 60 years or more of magical learning and research over him

This really went downhill starting with the whole Tonks capture scene and how they'd rather spend the next couple weeks waiting to try and contact anybody about it so his sister could be raped and tortured for longer. There is just so much plot armor around malfoy/snape/narcissa/dumbledor it makes it hard to read. There are so many things that are just incredibly stupid or cowardly i don't even know where to start. Like where is Katie? What about pub lady? Every single fight harry gets into he loses control completely and everyone around is scared of him and think he is turning evil and when he actually does some big thing then his mind breaks because he is too weak or scared to handle his emotions and voldy takes over... it's framed as something he is overcoming and getting better at each time but then he does something cowardly or stupid or plot armor kicks in and he fails or makes the wrong choice every. single. time. It's doesn't even have to be a different stupid wrong choice, he doesn't stop draco the first time he tries to kill someone, the second time he tries to kill someone, the third time he tries to kill someone etc.. He trusts dumbledor after he tried to fucking enslave him - how utterly retarded could someone be - no ally, no person that tried to enslave your mind and make you their meat puppet should just be 'oh well he meant well im sure', and it makes it even more frustrating that all your characters are basically saying the same thing 'i hate albus and don't care if he dies - can't trust him' but then they still trust him and listen to his advice until it's too late to make a difference.

Ohh boy tommy is in BIG trouble.

Percy is an arse. UMBITCH NEEDS TO DIE

hmmm DID YOU PUT IT DOWN THERE?

Better late than never

Micheal should have been 1 too