Reviews for Revenge of the Duchess |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Simply amazing. I love this story so much, well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are the most talented author i've ever seen. this was practically a whole novel. i hope you continue writing these masterpieces. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is not fanfiction uts a freaking book an amazong one at that! Amazong plot with all the characters we love and really grwat writing I’ve read this story from chapter 1 to the end like 3 times its a classic I will always go back to, I remember readong this while the author was updating every chapter and I waited impatiently every time 100% recommend |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is one of the few fanfictions above 100k words that i read in a long time. the opening was intriguing, and it kept bringing me in more and more because of how interesting the story line is. there are some missed chances to further the writing, but i doubt anyone will notice said chances the entire storyline was very interesting, but at one point i kinda got bored of the constant wait on some certain parts such as how far away the marriages were some characters were missing i wished were included, but you did wonderful with what characters you had. this writing was also wonderful and there is somethinf that draws us readers in that i cant pinpoint for anyone reading this, i cannot suggest more to read this story for yourself |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait im confused too. ares didnt know of this counter attack, and i doubt percy will let a band of 80 men to disengage his men and head to the mansion. yet ares said that he sent men to the mansion during the battle? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i forgot about dylan, i was too busy trying to figure out who he was |
![]() ![]() ![]() just…pull her back or smth and not put yourself in the line of fire |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope lady soleia sticks on the idea of “an enemy of my enemy is my friend” sort of thing (kellie’s enemy is annabeth, soleia enemy is kellie, so theoretically soleia is friend with annabeth albeit weak connection) |
![]() ![]() ![]() first w ive seen from drew in a long time |
![]() ![]() ![]() War is coming. *raises my Kopis to rally the troops* |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's rude. My baby sister's birthday is on Valentine's Day. Personally, I find the day is overrated for proposing because that is just a cheap excuse to not forget your anniversary. But I DO agree with your distrust of society. I have watched my fair share of Crime and History Documentaries, but I think that it might be healthy for you to stop watching them as they seem to be making you a little paranoid. Trust me I know, I have had to stop watching Crime Documentaries whenever my little brother is around because he is paranoid. Literally, I was at my desk typing an essay for my Literature class he walked into my room and I said "What are you doing?" and he screamed. I don't understand, I mean, he WALKED into my room where I'm almost always in, he comes in and I speak he screams? That is literally how paranoid my brother is. I still don't know why he came into my room. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FFFF |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch. . . as a man I KNOW the pain of getting kicked in the lower parts, but I DON'T know what pain it must feel to get stabbed there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup, that's Drew. Though I can't say that I'm surprised. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy Expletive. KILL PRINCESS MEDEA! |