This is very good. There is characterization, individual motives, growth, reasonable growth and development, divergence from cannon to keep things interesting, a well though out plot, a complete lack of lazy writing.

this story, is pretty good. and it sucks that some smuck ruined the story from being finished. don't let one fool ruin your self-confidence in your stories. idk if you will see this but never give up on what you believe.

Yet another decent fic abandoned by a fucktard. Go suck cock, asshole.

Very interesting premise. Really enjoyed the first chapter but looked ahead and saw it is very likely a Naruhina story which makes it a story I won't read. Which is unfortunate and not your fault at all as it is me who dislikes Hinata and Naruhina not you or anyone else.

Thanks for the very interesting premise! Hope you pick up the story again as I think it would be very interesting to finish.

it's a shame that this story was stopped in the middle just because of some shameless and ungrateful readers. it's hard to find interesting fanfiction. i'm even sure some comments are only done by one person because their writing style is the same. for that person GO TO HELL!

Great story, and learned a new word. (Astucious)

ok start out good...then naruto was suddenly even worse than canon and willing to serve to be the whipping boy even when he was already in a bad mood.
why did he go straight back to meek little puppy wanting to please the hokage? and beg for forgiveness i mean he was already having a bad day and getting more annoyed so wouldn't the clones memories of the entire day have made him more so? especially after the only way the clone could have popped would be if the ABU or the hokage attacked him?

I’m sad for the loss of wonderful story but bravo to you for getting out when they wouldn’t listen you deserve better.

Fuck you, you worthless asshole. I hope you got aids and died.

How dare hiruzen do that to Kakashi?! Ofc Kakashi doesn't wanna get close & form bonds with his team. He'll fucking kill himself if he loses them!
He lost his father after he was outcast as traitor; losing his teammates then being labeled a frnd killer; having to deal with the political consequences of a non-uchiha having sharingan; having assassination attempts on him by his own village's shinobi's aka roots; losing Minato & Kushina; guilt of not being able to help & stop what happened with itachi as the anbu captain; being denied of seeing naruto by the council & hokage; trying to kill himself by frequently doing anbu missions; and finally, even after being assigned team 7, he was forced by the council to focus on training the Uchiha & disregard the other two.
One can only handle so much wo going totally insane or getting emotionally detached.

Not for me. Although I honestly kind of expected that. Ibiki just doesn't grab my attention at all. Don't like him.

Sly's premise is amazing but I'd have to change the Ibiki bit. Honest to God, it just seems stupid to hand someone over to a hardass who is basically a ticking time-bomb primed to explode. After the last chapter I'd say a different approach isn't just preferred but downright needed.

I enjoyed your story immensely. It is sad that it is discontinued, but I just wanted to say thank you for the effort you put in to the parts that you put up for us all to read.

Best luck on your future endeavours!

Funny, you seem to be the worthless cocksucker here. "I got a bad review. They were men to me!" Boo-fucking-hoo you worthless cunt. Go cry to your daddy.

yeahh so it is a trash fic good to know

so he had not enough and is not fed up with the village?
so sill stupid pussy beta bitch Naruto ?