Interesting re-working of the Star of the county down. I'm particularly fond of the songs of our island rendition.

It makes much more sense know that Pivot Point is a sequel to this XD I accidentally read them backwards. Oh well. Now I’m only more interested though! I’ll have to give the others a try as well. This was very interesting! The one thing I’m still curious about is: Is magic easier for Holly when she uses the elder wand staff? If that was shown, I missed it, but it seemed to be hinted at earlier on but then she didn’t really use it much. I’m excited to go back to the sequels now!

I'm loving the excellent start already!

very good story i dont get the Harry Potter was she male in her world? Anyway good story thanks :D

Why Harry confused? Isn’t her name Holly ?

glad to see someone join the adventure from the beginning, none of this mary sue falls from the sky stuff

cool! Another HP/LOTR story.

:)

I love how she turned the past of her father and his friends into a beautiful but heartbreaking story

Pourquoi changer Harry en fille ?

This borderline fetishistic desire to be 'wielded' is really weird and off-putting.

it doesn't make sense that she wouldn't bring at least some venom with her did to them "breaking". she is a witch. nothing would break in her bag unless she intentionally broke something.

she was supposed to have created packs for everyone that are extended and lightweight. did she forget it something?

I thought Holly was going to make extended bags for everyone. But, there has been no mention of them since

Brilliant story. Ty for writing it. It’s nice to read a storyline, etc

I can't post a review on the final chapter, as it seems I've done so before... rip.
I wasn't sure if I'd posted a review after you'd just finished writing a couple of years ago.
This is my second read through of this story. Many story-lines I forget in too quick a time frame as I move on to find the next; always hungry for more good stories.
This was well written with minimal mistakes (apart from deviations from cannon, which is fine in my mind).
Time now for me to pursue the remainder of your stories and see if there are others that will catch my imagination.
Thank you very much for your writing brilliance and seeing this story through to its end.
Many kind regards.