That was so cool haha well done

goddamn that was a fantastic chapter , one of the best of i have ever read , nothing short of a masterpiece none of the boring details , everything keeps you at the edge of your seat not to mention the snarky comments the description of the fight oh for the love me i loved it , wonderful job sir if it was by my choice you'd get an award just for this chapter alone

Leave the review responses to the end. The majority of your readers do not want to see them.

Maybe throw a bucket of ice cold water on her and see if Umbridge melts?

If Cedric took the longest time for the task, and Krum took the ‘second longest’. Then HOW did Fleur take longer than Krum? Either your maths or your proofreading need some assistance.
Also, apostrophes do NOT make pluralizations. Apostrophes ARE needed to make the possessive case. Get a grammar primer. Learn how to use an apostrophe.

SLAY HARRYYYY
I am loving Harry an Apophis ngl, if only this was a dark harry story they could be friends... T-T

so riddle trash coward got an heir must be a batty boi like riddle pants lol

dumble you old fairy twaty

dumbles up the bum dumbles lol

Wow. I felt like I just went on a roller coaster that did a 360 loop, hit a massive jump, dropped me off a cliff, flung me into a volcano and drowned me in the ocean… cuz damn that was good. Top 3 things I loved:
1. Harry was badass as fuck
2. Harry got 2 hot chicks as his gf
3. Harry defeating everyone like an absolute god
Can’t believe ppl in comments hate on this, 9/10 story one of the best I’ve read thanks

What the fuck? Hes raping Rita holy shit thats fucked up. How the fuck are we supposed to like Harry after this?

Great fic so far! Harry is hilarious lmao. Not too sure about him being a rapist, but it's not the worst thing ive read so it's fine. Same thing with the Harry/Tonks.

I would say this if I have the chance, give the Percy Jackson book series ago, and read those and don’t judge it off the movie. The Percy Jackson movie is the equivalent to the Eragon movie in that some parts of the source material or changed and did not work out well. It’s also why that film series never continued after the first movie in my own opinion because it changed things way too much. It’s the same case with the Percy Jackson film series compared to its book series.

The problem of this story is that the author is trying really hard to be 'cool'. But his cool is too teenager style of 'cool'. Really? Raping Skeeter? Dude, you have no class. That is just sad af.

I feel bad for you.

You know i cant actually find Dark Lord Potter on your profile