Reviews for Apex
Elchonon21 chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
really good beginning and I would love to see harry with Tonks
orthodox1057 chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
Tonks! No question about it.
zippydip chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
Nice one.
Cheers
aidabye77 chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
I love a badass Harry. LOL Please don't pair him with Ginny, she's to much of fangirl. Great story so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.
JC70s chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
So far, I really like your beginners chapter. As you said, it is true that many writers had written similar stories, but you already took a different road presenting us with the “new” Harry. I like this Harry willing to stop anybody trying to bullying him. Switching to pairing I would like if you pairing him with Astoria. I had read so many stories about H/G and Harry/Tonks, but zero about Harry and Astoria. A new Harry I believe needs a new female companion/partner, don’t you think?
Can’t wait for your next installment!
albus potter-greengrass chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
Astoria please Ginny no
Xlnt chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
Tonks or Astoria sound good, nice start btw
Smith221 chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
Wow what a pathetic chapter ,never expected this from you , for someone who started writting ffs with badass harry , u r surely doing an amazing writting a shit harry , someone punched him for fucks shake and what his comeback I am past my patience seriously this harry potter is even more pathetic than canon who takes everyone's shit
Sextant chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
If i had to make a choice between the 3 girls/woman, it would be Tonks. Reason- maturity level. Plus, Tonks can help Harry in ways that the other two can't even dream of. You also have the fan-girl aspect which is a huge hell no.
This has been done before but put a new slant on it and it will be fine. I will suggest letting Neville come to Harry's side. He will also need a male at his side. Sirius also.
You have Harry as grey/dark. Grey is much better and gives more options like allies he can have.
Write out what each person can give Harry in his quest. Be realistic and you will get your answer.
AdamSnow chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
I say go with Tonks. You can have her be like is bodyguard/secretary when he gets into the business side of things and with her powers she could be his perfect spy like a magic natasha romanoff/ black widow
podlizurko chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
Of the three Tonks and Astoria are by far the better, but please pick Tonks i always love it when his girl is older.
Tinchu chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
I don't even like harry being friends with the longbottom, any weasly, granger and lovegood forget about being pair with any of them , Hogwarts has many witch and wizard still people have to make harry either friends with these people or pair him with them , there is nothing left to actually read about harry being friends with these people or being paired opposite then it has become so boring and annoying so astoria in this case tonks is 2nd option though I would prefer it would be harry and fluer pairing
a.bonetti92 chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
good history... but i hope he learn the magic and political situation.
i don't like Ginny Weasley because is too much fan girl. Astoria Greengrass is interesting.

i like this story.
burnnotice chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
this is a good beginning. can't he be in a relationship with all 3 girls?
phoenix-rob chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
great start.
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