I understand real life comes first, but its been about 13 years... Please tell me that you've not abandoned this wonderful fic? I'm enjoying the way that you have written a full blown story here with interesting and intriguing characters and events going on and you've essentially left this as a bit of a cliffhanger. We do not know how his family is going to react to her, or whats going to go on with the baron...

I hope to see an update.

Loving your story. I don't have any technical feedback. I enjoy the characters you've created and their interactions. Please keep the story going!

Spent all day reading this and I'll have to finish when I get back from work. Great job

her mom is either bipolar or mpd. skitzo is ...paranoia times infinity lol

NOOOOO! You gotta have the vapors! That gets the most laughs. Especially with strong willed characters being the targets of such vapors. They always have a sarcastic and or whitty comeback!

That was rather abrupt and a little anti-climatic, but I liked it!

Only 4 years. I would have done it for life and he would have had to live in the stable as well. The royal stables are heated if I remember right. LOL

Poor. Very juvenile IMO. I'm astonished this ran for so long. I gave up at Chapter six. What colours is somebody wearing - yawn - who cares?
Borys

I do hope we find out whom is responsable for the poisoning!

Okay- doubt you will ever read this but have to get it off my chest. After laying here (physically handicapped now at young age) and reading FIFTY-SEVEN CHAPTERS I do NOT appreciate being DUMPED! You are a talented young writer with enjoyable, believable characters who brought me several hours of relief from pain WITHOUT NARCOTICS as I rode, climbed, swam, ran, laughed and cried with your characters. You need to complete this story young lady. DISCIPLINE. I am also also curious where you got the absurd notion that muses are childish. ALL creative people have them. Krathnae was as enjoyable as any other character! I realize you must be in college now - but I seriously hope you do not abandon this gift you have blessed with. You have a RESPONSIBILITY to share it with others.

thank you for writing this. i assume it would be too much to hope for this story to be continued after 4 years? ;)

hey, i have to try at least. i like the story, its fun, nicely written and kept me wanting to read more during the last 3 days.

Please update soon this is one of the best non-Harrt Potter things I have ever read.

great story. How offten are you updating?

sorry i haven't actually reviewed all these years i've been reading this fic, but is there any hope at all that you're going to continue writing it?

Hey-

I was reading theis for the seventh time when I realized that in the chapter he tied a note to a bird, and there were NOT any bows, but in the hearing you say there are. You might want to clear that up a bit.

I love the story though!