|Reviews for Mutual Exiles|
| The Rocha chapter 6 . 7/26
An interesting tale, linked to Carrots and Cauliflowers I see.
Cooler doesn't seem like a bad sort. Through he may merely be hoping that a saiyan kills Freeza so he can take his place. Still seems to be a massive improvement on Freeza and ruthless psychopathy. He may be someone the Saiyans can work with.
The Queen Romei is pretty kickass. That's Vegeta's mother, alright. And sorry Cell, I don't think she is taking any comers.
I'm actually surprised Turles is playing his cards so close, telling them about the Tree of Might.
Bardock seems to actually have some of his famed psychic powers, but they're a lot more subtle than I CAN SEE THE FUTUUUUUUURE.
I wonder when/if the Saiyans will realize a big number of their problems come from the fact they have a horrible society of emotionally crippled battle junkies detached from each other. People like Bardock and Gine are weirdos in saiyan society, but for them to advance, they need to become the rule.
Looks like getting Tarble is the primary goal right now. AFAIK Tarble is pretty strong, he just needs to toughen up. Perhaps Bardock is the key here, he's probably the one saiyan who could "get" someone like Tarble, who's a lot like Gine in personality.
| AstralRaven chapter 6 . 7/15
I hope you continue this fic, everything about it is superb and there is no other fic like yours out there. From the pacing, to the characterization, to the plot, this fic is truly god tier.
| Gold Testament chapter 2 . 5/28
You mean a reason for Cooler to hate his brother aside from being "daddy's favorite and heir", Mr. Never trained a day in his life. I think if Cooler knew Goku's power level at birth, he would have laughed while respecting him.
| Gold Testament chapter 1 . 5/28
This is meant to be the spin-off/prequel to Carrots and Cauliflowers. Shows what happened the day Planet Vegeta went boom from Gine's perspective as she was the one to explain things to Kakarot/Goku in the main story. Most likely this will be marked as complete/cancelled once the two stories completely connect.
| nliochristou chapter 6 . 9/12/2020
question will the events of dragon ball and early DBZ( around Namek/Freeza Saga) go the same or will you change it; also do you plan puting the remaing saiyans( and maybe Cooler and his crew) to stay on earth in the future;
| presidentuziel chapter 6 . 9/1/2020
I live competence porn, and that's usually Bardock's thing. I can't believe I waited to read this fic.
Also I like the explanation that Turles is Bardock's brother way better than whatever tf the official explanation was.
Fantastic fic, and I can't wait to see it connect to Carrots and Cauliflower.
| presidentuziel chapter 1 . 9/1/2020
Bardock is such a romantic.
I'm glad I finally started reading this. I didn't expect a Bardock survival fic. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
| Anon chapter 6 . 8/23/2020
Well, I'd say that additional two week wait was worth it for the double story update. I liked the fight section, but I love the drama being set up in this chapter. Does Gine really have a bun in the oven? If so, is Bardock the father? If he's not, then who? Toma? Thouser?!... Cooler? (:O That'd be insane) What is happening to Tarble? Is he being tortured, interrogated, and/or awaiting execution? Is he being held as a backup in case Vegeta dies? So many questions, so many paths. Can't wait to see what you have in store. Keep it up!
| story absorber chapter 5 . 7/22/2020
its been 6 days before the previous update please update its so good like a drug
| Anon chapter 5 . 7/17/2020
I hope your two fics crossover at some point, I'd love to read a fight like Bardock, Goku, Caulifla, and Cooler vs Freeza. You'd probably have to buff Freeza a bit or add a couple baddies to help even the playing field. Regardless if you go in a completely different direction, I know it'll be a pleasure to read. Keep up the good work!
| story absorber chapter 4 . 7/15/2020
| Amanny chapter 4 . 6/27/2020
Gine is badass taking a beating from the Queen of Saiyans
| SuperSaiyajin4Vegeta chapter 3 . 5/22/2020
I don't think Cooler is THAT much weaker. He managed to match Goku post Yardrat in his true form after all. I know he trained, but that seems like too large a gap.
| Amanny chapter 3 . 5/20/2020
| Caspian123 chapter 1 . 5/2/2020
Wait... waitwaitwaitwait... Was that...? Did you? Ohhhh you sly dogggg, the two fanfics are conected, right? I know what you did there. Well played.