Reviews for God of Magic and Master over Death |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love this story! hope you keep updating it |
![]() ![]() this is very good my guy keep going |
![]() ![]() Eine sehr schöne Geschichte die sie da geschrieben haben! Sie hat mir sehr gefallen. Das Harry in die Vergangenheit gereist ist, war ein kluger Schachzug von ihnen. Ich hatte das jedenfalls nicht kommen sehen. Als er nach Hogwarts gegangen ist dachte ich das es ein Hogwarts 2000 Jahre in der Zukunft sein würde aber nein, es war immer noch dasselbe Hogwarts. Eine sehr gute Geschichte 5/5 Sternen! Gruß ShadowNephilim |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is where you end! update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poke around with one of the strongest objects in the universe and see what happens right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant story so far.. thanks |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Thanks so much for all your hard work. |
![]() ![]() This is an awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked reading this! Hope you continue it soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, there's no point in adding a new character to plot-relevant events if their presence doesn't change anything. Haraldr's AoE burning was a cool new move. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dislike the use of "Character X didn't know why, but they felt like doing this thing that's out of character for them" with Fury. Thor's reaction to Haraldr crying is corny to me. However, overall I like this. I like the premise of the story so far and look forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a wonderful story and I hope you pick it back up again! |
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