Hello I hope this finds you well I'm writing this review to tell you I enjoy the story the flow is good along with the excellent dialog and I find the way you write jaune to be quite pleasant along with the slight glimpses the other characters get about his otherworldly nature. In conclusion I like your story thank you for writing it have a good day,night,afternoon or evening

Ignore the losers complaining about whatever nonsense they like to gripe about. If they've got nothing actually useful or pleasant to say, they should just keep their whiney mouths shut like the worthless children they are.

I am, truthfully sad to see this discontinued. I do hope that you pick this back up again at some point. This was an enjoyable read, and I wish you the best with your future works.

Why not ARSN? Arson is cooler. Fire is cool. It represents Jaune's chaotic journey in Yharnam.

Excusez moi, who the fuck is this loser? Battling god but can't dodge or even block a spear from a teenager who has only faced human instead of eldritch horrors?

That flashback in the beginning is also annoying. You could have slowly revealed the information as the story progresses. Especially when you want to make the bastard as pathetic as this one. That way, we wouldn't have expected him to be competent. Your flashback gave us an expectation of how he would fare in the exam and you disappointed us greatly (I am representing those who are unsatisfied, not those who carelessly praise you in the review section).

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If I may ask, was Gascoigne freed from the dream when Jaune killed him or when Jaune become an Old One. I know it probably doesn't impact the story but I'm just curious on how you have it

Another interesting story killed by a retarded writer but hey at least we have To Roll The Die DxD, shit fic as a consolation prize, yay.

This story is so damn good. Wish it continued …

Love this

Nice

Заебись, чëтко. 12/10.

It saddens me greatly that this is abandoned. Also, you should probably have (abandoned) in the description so people don't come here thinking it's a complete fic like I did.

I hope this story gets more chapters in the future

I require more sustenance pls

Man, do i really want to read this story to completion