Reviews for My Hero Academia: Unchained Predator
edboy4926 chapter 36 . 8/17
Awesome chapter.

Honestly, the MHA was a disappointment, specially the treatment toward Deku.
Rialga chapter 36 . 8/17
Congrats on having the most reviewed MHA crossover! It's well earned!

Oof, the aftermath of the Slayer's rampage is starting to hit now! Makes me wonder if LoV and AFO will also be rapidly responding to his actions!

Looking forward to the next chapter!
MasterPainter chapter 36 . 8/17
Hellow, I just want to leave a sujestion for you that could be added to the story, when you eventually begin the arc where the demons invade Earth I was thinking maybe you could make the Maurader and the DOOM Hunter, from DOOM Eternal, be a little more tough for the Slayer to beat.

Because I just feel like they were wasted in the game, I mean they went from bosses to just ben more generic enemies for the Slayer to kill, specifically I think you could do more with the Maurader like maybe make him the Slayer's archenemy, because he was a Night Sentinel before he sided with the Maykrs and was corrupted, he's basically Hell's version of the Slayer if you think about it.

Anyway that's all I wanted to say, love your story and I hope you consider my sujestion but if you don't that's fine after all this is your story, you decide.
shados960 chapter 36 . 8/17
Another banger chapter man! Also congratulations on being the top MHA crossover in the site! That is no easy feat and honestly you earned it with the dedication and amazing work you put into each chapter. And I can’t wait to see what else you have in store for the future, cause all of this is still the tip of the iceberg!

Alright so Keigo has seen the aftermath of The Slayer’s latest rampage, but when he considered some heroes not being cut out for the job, yeah he was right but not exactly for the right reasons. Cause it’s very likely that The Slayer is going to make a lot of heroes quit after traumatizing the daylights out of them. Heck which may simply accelerate what happened in canon, cause a lot of hero’s quit since they were in it for money and glory. And that’s probably going to get worse when the demons/UAC invade MHA…

But it’s a great detail to see how the massacres The Slayer has done these last few chapters are simultaneously hitting the heroes(it’s a great sign of decent world building). And an even nicer detail is Hawks who hears these all these calls at once in mortal dread connecting the dots. After all, not many people can annihilate almost a quarter of Japan’s villain gangs in one night.

And once this disturbing information gets to the HPSC, this may lead to the heroes mounting the hunt for The Slayer…that is if the LOV don’t retaliate first. But I doubt either side will succeed.

Yet we also see more of Nagant, and I am very intrigued by what this version of her went through to drive Nagant into becoming a lethal protector of sorts. But it’s clear that villain human traffickers had a big impact here, perhaps an undercover mission gone horrifically wrong or perhaps seeing some comrades get horrible demise' that drove her over the edge. Either way, it’s clear Nagant focuses primarily on slaying scum that are in that particular vile business, but apparently The Slayer has driven her to come ti Musutafu, but oh boy it’s going to be interesting if The Slayer meets her. As I’m still sorta convinced she may join The Slayer’s crusade when the demons invade, heck I’m still eager to see if you’ll be introducing Knuckleduster or your own spin on the hero turned vigilante.

Also LOL The Slayer ripping that engine out, was honestly better than what most of the heroes experienced. But buddy soiling your pants is the least of your worries, though this may also alert the heroes the Doom Slayer has a tank motorcycle now.

But interesting to see the Horsemen travel to hell to see if their sole allies down there have any allies. But I’m sorta worried this may bring some interest in the "other denizens" who may eavesdrop on the conversation and cause something to stir. But I’m still wondering if the demons there are connected to the Doom Slayer’s demons, but that may be a yes and no answer there. Also here’s hoping Abaddon is still around as he was a cool neutral antagonist in the first Darksider’s game.

But Mirko’s blood test may be interesting, as instead of radiation, I wonder if they’re going to find traces of Argent Energy in her system from her close proximity to the Doom Slayer. What that will do to her, I have no idea, but I’m wondering if that will inevitably seed her power boost in the future. Maybe an argent empowered quirk awakening? She has to catch up to The Doom Slayer somehow, given her "destiny". And maybe it can also be what helps her avoid losing all three limbs like she did in canon…

That or perhaps unfortunately be what also seeds the MHA world discovering Argent Energy and make the Doom Slayer’s worst fears come true. Or perhaps be what also causes the Demons to invade MHA thanks to denizens of that universe being far too curious for their own good. Heck it may even lead the demons to come to MHA if this theory is true, since combined with Hayden’s less than subtle way to get The Doom Slayer from interfering with his plans, may lead to the Demons following the Argent trail left behind.

But we also see Loki disguised as a hospital psychiatrist pick at Mirko’s brain and it does seem like she is denying the bloodlust is clearly dwelling inside her. Only what triggers it, has yet to be seen. But it also seems like Loki is trying to push for the prophecy to come true, and that includes Mirko’s "destiny", for what purpose, I have no idea. But I imagine for chaos or some twisted idea of the universe needing change. After all the god of mischief definitely would be bored with the "stagnate" peace in the Ascendant and Mortal realm. But Loki slowly setting up the pieces in his little master plan without anyone noticing is a great addition, as it only makes the plot more intriguing.

Great chapter as always, and I can’t wait to see more to come in the future. But in the meantime, go and fight for The Emperor of Mankind and annihilate the xeno scum that dare stand in his glory!
Death Fury chapter 36 . 8/17
Excellent chapter
Bruhman chapter 36 . 8/17
LESS GOOOO NEW CHAPTER
Also I really hope we get some quake connections here because quake has some influence in doom universe like slip gates and quad damage soo eventually when we get to lovecraft mythos it's going to be the most awesome shit ever
chidoriprime chapter 36 . 8/17
Salamanders are the true Marines XD
HydraLightning chapter 36 . 8/17
Take your time and keep up the amazing work. I cant wait for them to learn of the Slayer's testament.
Cerberusx chapter 36 . 8/17
Hmmmm. Was just thinking about this story earlier today. Gotta wonder if they'll find trace elements of Argent Energy in Rumi's blood?

Also, was thinking that demons from Doom might have noticed a 'tear' or 'rip' in reality to the MHA world? Cause Dr. Hayden method of taking the Slayer off the board wasn't subtle. I imagine the release and use of power to do so was noticed. It would be interesting that when the demons from Doom show up, if they were to put up similar Doom Slayer Testaments like in Doom (2016). And Heros end up find them at the demons of Doom lairs. What a way for the Heros to find out about the Vigilante.
Cmd1 chapter 36 . 8/17
For real fun, go camping after having your wisdom teeth removed. Ha ha ha. Awesome story. Ignore the haters and do as you want, it's been working out so far.
Trux-Killer chapter 36 . 8/17
Cant blame you on Helldivers 2. Its starting to go down and more difficult. Nerfs and all that. And the others visiting Hell… oh no. If they’re not careful with their talk, they might give the demons a clue of a new world to try and consume…
Tsamis chapter 36 . 8/17
I wonder how would the Slayer react he sees that now the demons will start invading this earth too
1234goku01 chapter 32 . 8/17
GRACIAS POR EL CAP HERMANO
BradyBunch22 chapter 36 . 8/17
You did a great job here! Looking forward to when AFO gets a visit from Doomguy. Sure hope AFO doesn't open a portal to Hell and bring the demons here...
Th3Hybr1d chapter 36 . 8/17
This story has me so excited for updates that I will drop whatever I’m doing (as long as it’s nothing vital or immediate) as soon as I see a notification of a new chapter. In this case I quit playing a game when I saw the new chapter, and boy was it worth it!
Yeah, the heroes must be starting to realize what sort of beast the Vigilante is, but hey- despite the messes he leaves behind, at least there are no civilian casualties!
The league of villains, I’m sure, won’t be as appreciative about this.
I am looking forward to the inevitable meeting between Lady Nagant and the Slayer, what a duo these two will be upon villains and crooks alike.
Those cops are indeed the luckiest pair of mortals to live- hopefully they aren’t secretly corrupt…
The horsemen making plans to head to hell? Hopefully nothing goes wrong for them and they will come out with more answers on what to do.
Loki up to his usual antics… very clever use of the names for his disguise.
Well done on the chapter as usual, I eagerly await the next update! (Take your time, of course; we can’t rush perfection)
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