Reviews for The King Is Dead |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Let me just start this by saying that this is phenomenally written. The descriptions, the dialogues, the characters, the plot, they all feel real and thought-through, this doesn't feel like fanfiction, but a professionally written story. I don't understand, nor do I feel for your Arthas, however. His strange naming aside, he's such a narcissistic little shit it's disgusting. His "twin" Joffrey is a psychopathic little monster who grew up torturing little animals. His father is a fool whose concept of ruling ended with fucking a whore and getting drunk. He defends these people at every opportunity, I just don't understand it. Why would he even feel anything for his "father"? He was a man grown when he died, it's understandable he's full of regrets, but why did he suddenly regress into a little child who gets all angry because his psychopath of a brother was slighted? I repeat, he was 30 something years old when died, it doesn't feel like it. His constant "I am not worthy" mantra is reminiscent of Jon Snow and is the polar opposite of Joffrey who is "the greatest King", but they are one and the same, two sides of the same coin completely focused on themselves to the detriment of everyone around them, he'll be a shitty king, this I agree with. Kings are supposed to rule, not live in their own heads. But his mistakes and his history are what should give him strength to stand for all this injustice he sees daily. You don't want the throne, fine, you shouldn't, but what kind of man defends a psychopath constantly? His character doesn't make any sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pleeaaase continue this is so fucking good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was really enjoying this story up until this chapter, it had a different take on Joffrey and I really enjoyed it. But the moment you decided to kill off Robert the way that you did, everything became predictable. All that became of it was an alternate way of Robert's Rebellion that's slightly more complex. Its essentially a retake of Rhaegar Targaryen. Still somewhat enjoyed it though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fffffffuuuuuuuuuucccckk! |
![]() ![]() ![]() why is he such a pvssy. really kills the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh that change to the crypts scene was so organic, flowed really nice from the previous chapter's events |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was a really interesting start, got me hooked up :3 I love how Arthas is really trying here, how he does his best to find a possitive light on his family and such |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was hella surprising but really well wrought. Honestly thought the Tyrell's would be ripped out, but the politicking done here was brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly thought Mandon went off to kill Joffrey... the whole I see only one King here business, being with Arthas so long? Seeing the White Walkers? I thought his plan was to kill Joffrey really |
![]() ![]() ![]() hhmmmmmm, Oh you asshole hahahahajajajahajajaha |
![]() ![]() Hope Arthas finds Sansa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pls, just why did u stop? Dont leave us hangin like this, this is torture u sadistic authorJk, maybe... :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing chapter as always my friend great job :) |