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i have no idea wtf is going on, this is a huge ass mess

Great stories

So a few years later I see this again. The reread was a lot of fun and now I have way more chapters to visit! Super duper! Thank you for sharing this.

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5 chps in and i still have no clue what exactly is going on except that Taylor triggerd into a shipgirl, reat might aswell be oneshots lined into a story

hope your doing alright an hoping to see more of this an your other works as they are all fav list for reading an re-reading

Please update your stories

A tiny nitpick for this four-year-old chapter: the king of La Gonave, co-ruler with Ti Memenne, was named Faustin Wirkus, not Faustus - this isn't Goethe.

Good story please update your stories

Geezus this just throws you right into the thick of it huh? No build up, just little people climbing into clevage and "here's a bunch of japanese terms, hope you know them."

The socialization thing is just government propaganda to get kids into government schools. It is important to interact with other people, but not in any way necessary for those others to be equally immature peers and certainly not necessary for it to be in the very artificial and restrictive environment of public schools.

Great story - liked the fact that it has forced me to learn stuff every chapter with wiki getting a flogging looking up all the naval equipment and terms 10/10 for detail - also in response to some of the other comments- as a guy I have no problem with rapists and traffickers getting the eunuch treatment- punishment fitting the crime in my opinion- although as a father the more bloodthirsty side me suggests that the could also make a wonderful feed source for Taylors shark and crocodile industry - might be the first useful thing they ever did lol :)

what the hell is going on? the farther i go the worse you make it obvious. in the beginning having clock and assault get dope slapped for dumb comments was fine. talking about training a man was iffy but as it was phrased as a joke i was willing to overlook it but by now you are making men into pets and cutting off their man parts.

pretty good so far. not in the navy or a gun nut to alot of the short terms i have to guess at. would really like a footnote or something when you start with things like DASH and CVS. still dunno what they are.