Reviews for Haze Gray
cfp33pfc chapter 2 . 4/13/2020
Interesting start, hope you continue. Ever think about including a glossary at the end of chapters? Stay safe and thanks for writing.
Rhys898 chapter 2 . 4/13/2020
Woohoo, instant gratification for the win! You rock!
Shivers82 chapter 2 . 4/13/2020
Great to see this posted as its own story. Looking forward to more.
Jubjub3000 chapter 2 . 4/12/2020
So... when will hookwolf get a full broadside? Cause every Ship girl fanfic I've seen so far has this! It's practically a tradition!

Anyway I'm going to guess that kancolle is a thing in this au and that's why they are worried about abyssal princesses, and not that they already exist...
Iceflame55 chapter 2 . 4/12/2020
I take it we're getting ready for a Duck Shoot? I mean we have literal Nazis (Who really WON'T see it coming), and a Dragon that hasn't got his ear as much to the ground as he should.
edboy4926 chapter 2 . 4/12/2020
Good story but you need to work on the grammar.
overpalada chapter 1 . 4/12/2020
Nice to see this becoming a full story
moops chapter 2 . 4/12/2020
Omg this is so great. I can't stop laughing at the hey hey hey. It's like pokemon
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