There's a LOT of mental whiplash involved in keeping up with this story.

Holy ape crackers, somebody on the internet knows Dahlgren exists? I grew up in King George, dad worked in Dahlgren for years. The base had a nice park and pool. last I was there. Used to ride bikes around it.

Should probably list this as Humor genre.

Still jumpy ss heck, and unfocused as well.

But also promising regarding the plot.

And ship girls are a thing, huh?

Too bad, less surprise advantage.. M

I coincide with what others said, this story is a mesh and skips vital scenes that we should know about.

To make things worse this is a story where the author is all the characters xD. As in each character has the personality of the auhtor. Reminds me of Smith from Matrix.

Ah never mind that last one. I just looked it up. First time hearing her name,

So dragon isn't an AI in this Fic? Wtf? That's so strange. I can't wait to see where that ends up

God this is all over the place. If this was written with some semblance of sanity the premise would have been great. It’s barely coherent

thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows

wowzers

Just when they thought they could relax. Great writing as ever, thank you.

Aft is a direction.

Stern is the A**.

Looks promising, but the writing style is just too fucking difficult to follow.

Thanks for the chapter

Great storytelling.