| Reviews for Harry Potter and The Shadow Phoenix |
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   wandamarie chapter 7 . 1/16 thank you for the chapter so far |
| wandamarie chapter 6 . 1/15 thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 5 . 1/15 thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 4 . 1/15 getting good thank you on to the next chapter thanks |
| wandamarie chapter 3 . 1/15 keep up the amazing work and thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 2 . 1/15 keep up the great work and thank you for the story so far |
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 1/15 thank you for the story so far |
| dixonjason403 chapter 1 . 11/27/2024 the dialogue is fucking AWFUL and beyond cringe. |
| LordSkirata chapter 34 . 7/19/2024 Good day, I'm very sad that this story was given up so close to the finish. Could you please give this beautiful and interesting Story the End it deserves? Best wishes LordSkirata |
| PerseusBlack625 chapter 34 . 7/12/2024 When will you finish the story, no update in 4 years and the way i see it you maybe have 4 chapters at most left as well as an epilogue. |
| dragonheart117 chapter 23 . 7/1/2024 Kinda getting bored. The unnamed death eaters is usefu to a writer so they don't have to come up with concrete numbers, but it seems like the death eaters are endless, I can't see any affect anything harries group has had on the effectiveness of the death eaters. Also I would imagine the complete destruction of a muggle village without care fore the statute of secrecy would invite all the countries to become involved because they have a vested interest in keeping the secret secret. Anyway the torture thing seems like the beginning of the end of the story or it should have been winding down to a cat and mice game of harry vs voldi rather than a war. p.s.s I can see the use of saying they discussed something without going into the actual conversation, but it seems like so many interesting conversations are missed... kinda sad. To end on a good note, you have written a wizarding war very well, better than 99% out there. probably 100% |
| dragonheart117 chapter 16 . 7/1/2024 havn't commented yet, but very good so far. Lots of good ideas in such a condensed area. Only complaints are 1. the romance went too fast, but that seems like a style thing because everything in this is going fast. 2. gave rita the stories. I know its fanfiction, so its like yay remember this character. But just because you have a character doesn't mean you have to use them. I'd much rather everyone create a new reporter that they don't hate to uplift instead. I'd thought of the house elf thing, but didn't think of the pheonix thing which is cool. Another thing proving dumbles is useless. |
| overlord of hell 2012 chapter 34 . 4/9/2024 Really enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more |
| grizzytx chapter 34 . 3/22/2024 Fantastic story. Really wish it was finished or that it didn't end on such a cliffhanger but thanks for an entertaining read. |
| Ultach chapter 26 . 2/18/2024 Continuity cock-up. NOT THE DA. Marauders Club, remember? MC, not DA therefore... Whoopsie? Or brain fart? Ciao. |