Reviews for Spirit Unto Dawn
Forsoothandconquest chapter 16 . 10/14
Where do we get to read the new story?
BeoWolf666 chapter 1 . 9/20
So are tali and Six a thing because that would be kinda cute
Vanessa Masters chapter 12 . 9/18
Charn and his squad shifted uncomfortably at all the guns pointed at them. "I'm listening."

"If you haven't already heard, it ain't looking too good for your people right now. The Anti-Slave faction and their influence is growing everyday with your raids being stopped left and right now. The Hegemony's focus will change from raids to protecting their own colonies. It's only a matter of time before pirates and slavers are gonna be run out of business."

"And your point is?" Charn inquired.

"Sooner or later, the Anti Slave faction will succeed and you guys will be branded as criminals. But that doesn't have to happen."

"What do you mean?"

"The hell do you think we mean?" Forge barked out. "It's simple. Either change what you're doing and help the Anti-Slave faction or spend your life as a real criminal for the rest of your life being hunted by Bounty Hunters that maybe aren't as shitty a being as you guys are."

Charn glared at the marine sergeant yet he wasn't a fool. What these humans had just told him held merit and weight to their words. It was undeniable that the Hegemony's problems were starting to grow at an exponential rate and judging by the trajectory of the rest of the galaxy, the days of slavery were soon about to come crashing down.

This goes against everything he had known and grown up on… but dammit, they were right. It was either change or be killed.

"F-Fine." Charn conceded. "We'll help the anti-slave faction overthrow the Hegemony."

"B-boss are you-"

"SHADDAP!" Charn yelled at his subordinate that spoke up. "I hate that they're right, but they are. It's either we do this or we go to Omega and pray that we don't wind up dead."

-

Dang.

Impressive and a massive undertaking.

Taking out the batartiana who pirate a asteroid.
Vanessa Masters chapter 11 . 9/17
Oooh. The Spartans learn about the cycle, but won't leave the universe to suffer a massive extinction event like their world did.

. some of them have to stop a runaway asteroid!
Vanessa Masters chapter 10 . 9/17
"What do you mean?" Kaidan asked.

"What, like their personality or something?" Jane surmised.

"Something like that." Tali said.

"Think it was a tricky task for all of us, Tali." Garrus said plainly earning nods from the others.

Tali shook her head at that. "It's not that simple everyone. See, since Quarians wear suits that basically cover our entire body and face," She gestured to her body. "the way we were taught in gauging someone's personality or mood was via body language. It's something that we all specialize in and were taught to become accustomed to since losing our home planet. Like with how Jenkins tries to stand as much as possible since being shot in his butt from Feros."

Immediately the Private began stuttering with his face turning red with embarrassment.

"You saw that?!"

Seeing his response, Tali began giggling like a sister would when catching her brother in a humiliating situation.

"No, I just recognize it since it isn't the first time I've seen it happen." Tali explained.

The rest of the crew laughed aloud as the private hung his head soon being ensnared by Ashley who rubbed her knuckle into his forehead.

"Ah, is Private Jinkies embawwassed?" Ashley taunted.

"GAH You know I hate that name." Jenkins retorted, wrenching himself free from his friend.

-

Rofl

But Tali does have it right, her people would read body language, the Spartans are different.

But what did Cortana find that was a fdoozy?

And he's awake, huzzah!
Vanessa Masters chapter 9 . 9/17
"What happened to them?" Jorge asked, gazing at the vacant gaze of one particular Salarian.

"I am not sure." Cortana admitted, her tone conveying discomfort. "Their physical anatomy… it's altered in a way I don't recognize."

Legion approached the glass that separated him from the Salarians on the other side, his fins moving about.

"They have been touched by the Old Machine." Legion announced.

"They've been "touched" by the Old Machine?" Cortana repeated in bewilderment. "What does that even mean?"

"We'll find out when we get that Geth." Six announced. "How far off is the target?"

-

When they leave the truth.

It'll shock the Spartans.

Maybe worse than the Elite and their race?

Oh, and Forge can be woken up!
Vanessa Masters chapter 8 . 9/16
Oriana was safe. That was all that mattered to her in the end.

She momentarily gazed up to the sky, thinking of the ship she had just seen and those six armored giants that had single handedly repelled a Batarian invasion.

One in particular stood out though for obvious reasons. The one who saved her sister.

Conflicting emotions welled up within her that she quickly stamped out. Yet something lingered from within that for the time being, all she could was to ignore it.

Now she had to explain to her boss why she abandoned her post so suddenly when the orders were to go dark.

This was not gonna be fun.

-

Cool! Miranda, Oriana and Vega!
Vanessa Masters chapter 7 . 9/16
Upon reading the name of the planet her face paled and she inhaled sharply in abject dread and horror.

"I need a shuttle ready for me." Miranda barked out in an icy tone, startling the Soldier next to her.

"Miss Lawson?" He said warily.

The look he got from her made him freeze on the spot as it was stone cold with a burning glaze in her eyes.

"Did you not hear me?" She asked sharply and rhetorically. "Get a shuttle ready for me."

"Y-Yes Ma'am!" The soldier rushed off with Miranda turning to walk away and prepare herself.

Her hand trembled lightly but she squashed the growing concern and focused on the task at hand.

There was no way in hell the Batarians were just gonna up and ruin everything she had worked to preserve. To protect.

No way in hell would she allow for it.

-

Ooooh, what's going on here!?

Interesting.
Vanessa Masters chapter 6 . 9/16
Oh, saved Jame, and she's reunited with her bro.

Experiments done on John and talking to the Geth Consensus about the heretics and reaper.
Vanessa Masters chapter 5 . 9/16
"No." Legion said in a slow tone. "These Geth… they are not a part of our Consensus. They are those who followed a different path."

"A different path?" Cortana repeated. "What the heck is that supposed to mean?"

"Before Spartan Six and Construct Dot arrival, the Geth were contacted by an Old Machine known as Nazara. It offered the Geth technology to achieve our goal but an exchange to assist the Old Machines in capturing the Citadel. We realized this offer would not help our cause and further distrust between organics and Geth. We refused, the Geth rather wanting to accomplish our own future through our own technology than the Old Machines. A small percentage however accepted the offer and peacefully broke away from the main network."

"Peacefully broke away, huh?" Cortana muttered. "Well looks like they ended up here of all places."

"The Consensus must know about this." Legion stated. "We must meet with them and see why this has transpired."

"So these Geth…" Cortana said warily. "They're not allies?"

"They're violent aggressive actions made against the Galaxy show them to be hostile." Legion stated. "They must be eliminated. Their presence ruins our intentions of integrating with organics."

Six regarded Legion for a moment, unsure of what to say exactly towards the Geth that has been his literal partner for the past few months.

"Focus on the mission at hand." Six said, gazing at Legion. "We'll talk about this later."

Legion only nodded. "We shall."

-

Indeed

Two shepards!?

Oooooh!
Vanessa Masters chapter 4 . 9/16
"Why yes I am." Cortana said happily. "And you are certainly an interesting one. Geth was it?"

"Correct. We are Geth. Over 1183 programs function within this platform."

"Huh, guess the term Legion fits you quite well." Cortana mused aloud thoughtfully. "So you're not one single AI entity but a multitude of them all dictating one body."

"That is correct." Legion said. "We operate on various functions for ships to the platform you see before you. The amount of programs within each ship or mobile unit varies based on necessity or storage capacity but we are all part of one consensus."

"But you're a named platform."

"Correct." Legion nodded. "When we were presented to Spartan-Six, we asked to accompany him to study organics on a more personal level. Most of the galaxy fears the Geth, thus direct contact would be difficult. Spartan-Six's and Construct-Dots arrival came as a surprise but an opportunity to learn."

Cortana found herself enraptured with this story with even Chief and Six having their heads barely angled but angled nonetheless over in Legions direction as they listened to Legion recounting his first meeting with Six and Dot.

"Spartan-Six was the only known organic that we would be able to interact with directly with the least possible chance of negative responses and reactions." Legion went on. "Spartan-Six presented us with the concept of individuality. This platform, while similar to most others, was still uniquely designed from others thus leading to the name of this platform being called Legion."

Cortana found herself smiling at the Geth. What a fascinating galaxy this must be if this is one of the first natives that they have met directly.

It was a bizarre first meeting to say the least.

-
Oh, true that.

Oh, jorge!

Just talked about this guy, how many others are going to poo out of the woodwork?

Oh, there's Shepard!
Vanessa Masters chapter 3 . 9/15
Oh, Legion!

Named early.
Abd Six sticking it to Cetberus, who he doesn't like.
Vanessa Masters chapter 2 . 9/15
Ooh, first contact and it's with the geth.

I'll Beth six having Dot was a nice surprise for them.

But the Quarian heard the Trans mission to him.

Yikes.

Well, I wonder how that'll go.
Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 9/15
Intriguing start abd eager to read more.
jaychristiansmith23 chapter 16 . 9/9
Can't wait
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