This is a really interesting fic, I love to see how Icarus is building his city and all his schemes.

Cringe gary stu wish fulfillment

The Dionysos bit was fascinating, and the running joke in Grover being too young for cursing is still amusing.

This is an awesome story, thank you for writing it.

There is something you need to learn, and that's how to take a break, because there has been no downtime inbetween the arcs, it's action into action into action and it's getting overwhelming.

Don't really understand how annabeth dying is mc's fault since the girl forced her way onto the adamas then she deliberately let prometheus go free because she thought she was smart so it was definitely the right decision what makes that worse is how she did it for information that was already known though she didn't know that but still... Along with her mother forcing situations to play out in a certain way so her problem child would be relevant... If it's anyone's fault it would have to be athena since it's obvious she used poseidons estranged daughter's attack to orchestrate these 'coincidences' so she could remove icarus's weapon from him since she isn't allowed to do anything but we all know she is only doing any of this simply because she felt slighted since she wasn't honored lol even if she knows for certain that the weapon wasn't meant to be a spear it doesn't matter since accepting that would remove all of her perceived justification for going through with all of this

Either athena or the fates pushing events in a certain way so annabeth can do something instead of just doing an task assigned to her to keep her attention is funny asf

To me it always felt as though the reason the oracles were supposed to be virgins was so only apollo could fuck them and then immediately heal them right after so they would still be virgins

so why exactly is Annabeths death being blamed on Icarus. she snuck in on the trip and now bianca is getting annoying about the consequences

Yo this is hype… really enjoying this

It feels out of character for Icarus to not free Nico as well, assuming this isnt another case of fate influencing his actions, it makes no sense for Icarus to leave someone trapped in the lotus hotel especially someone so powerful

this story is amazing. it has a quality to it that is breathtaking. „Make sure you dont rise too high too fast“ said by Dionysus coupled with ikaruses behavoir and world view then with what happened to his predecesor it just all comes together so beautifully. like he inherited the providence of the original ikarus and is fighting fate to fulfil what was impossible before. . reach the sun

damn you actually made me like mr D. that was some brilliant writing

Atlas grabbed 6 apples so he should have 5 more why is he acting as if he gave away his only apple?

Come back please this shit is gas